:) loved this story

Bella's a little too perfect.. it's kind of annoying and unbelievable and incredibly Mary-Sue ish... but I like the case itself..

Good story and enjoyable. Felt that at times the action were moving a little too fast, and too much emotional incidents with everyone crying a lot, but, a writer knows their own characters better than anyone else. But, overall the story was well done.

Hi, I wanted U 2 know how much I LUVEDthis fic...U R an AWESOME WRITER! TYVM 4 sharing yr talent w/ us! Wondering hon...was there a sequel or were U still planning on writting an epi all?! Have a great weekend! xooxo

Burkhart really? I think I know what show you watch

So.. Brandon Phillips? AKA James?

Loved it!
Heading off to read the sequel now

this was xcellent my kind of story thank you

Awesome story. It was really good. At first I didn't think I'd like it but it grew to liking it, it's just weird imagining Carlisle and Bella together lol

the family that Charlie helped

Bella's right spot on on this and alice needs duct tape on theirs mouths

oh goodie

What kind dossiers are Alice and Rose. Real bad ones. Telling guys they've known for two days abut Bella's personal life. She forgave them too fast. Especially after they couldn't keep their mouths shut twice in a row.

okay i read this story in a day and i loved it3

Enjoyed the story. You deal with the issues you use for storylines well. Like your characters and the fact that you always use family support and love to keep your stories real.