Love it xxx

I like this. It makes sense and the characters reacted the way they probably would have in the books. Good job. :D

AW! GOOD that Gred and Froge and Padfoot are on the case, so that Toadface will get her just deserts.

"I would have done everything." That line really gets me. Fabulous job. I absolutely love the way you portray Sirius.

Those two are just... there are no words. It breaks my heart every time I think about Harry losing Sirius. Just so wrong...

IF ONLY that had happened for real! If ONLY Sirius really had told Harry about the mirror, in OotP...

Bittersweet.

*wipes a tear from her eye* Aw, this right here, people, is the scene we all know is missing in OOTP. Thanks for such a wonderful piece of creativity :)

*wipes a tear from her eye* Aw, this right here, people, is the scene we all know is missing in OOTP. Thanks for such a wonderful piece of creativity :)

nice one _

Absolutely stunning piece of writing. My heart was breaking and soaring at the same time while reading this. you captured Harry's self-sacrificing brilliantly, his constant 'everthing is on my shoulders and it's all my own fault' rampaging thoughts.

And Sirius countering him were absolutely brilliant. Rather than write an angry driven Sirius who nearly loses his mind because he's so angry, you write a very believable Sirius, who CAN control his emotions when needed and actually acts as the awesome godfather he truly is capable of being.

This was absolutley brilliant, I loved it soooooo much! And I could definitely picture this in my head with Dan and Gary, they're brilliant actors!

Greetz Selene467

This is a really great story, and I have to agree that I loved the performances of Gary and Dan. Awesome job!

This is amazingly beautiful and incredibly sad! ') This should have been in the book! Hell all of the emotional bonding moments that JKR didn't write for these two should have been in the books! I LOVE Sirius soooo god damn much! I cried so hard when Sirius died when I read the book and even harder when i saw the movie! The way you wrote him and how much he cares for Harry makes me want to cry now, cuz of what happens to him in the end... :'( LUV you Padfoot!

You have my eternal respect, my friend! On making such a badass one-shot between these two! I hope you make more emotional stories for these two... *hint hint, wink wink* ;D

AWWWWW ! i love it , it was best when you showed the love and emotional side of sirius :) because in the films you dont realy see that do you ? x

ok i know ive been reviewing just about everything u have up but i really like ur stuff. its all really good. and this is no exception. i love it. ur really good at getting the emotions across. like REALLY good.

This is really cute and nice!