Leah Clearwater has so much potential as a character, but unfortunately SMeyer is preoccupied with whiny Bella, and sparkly vampires and things like that, so she shoves Leah to the side to be bitter and unlikeable.

I commend you, therefore, for taking her and putting her into a story that gives her the depth she deserves. I like the bit about the running, and the way she calls him "brother."

Well done.

A great story. Very well written.

Too bad that Stephenie Meyer always portrays Leah as the underdog(no pun intended).She should have written a book about Leah instead of whiny Bella.

Very nice...it was sweet how she missed his smile.

I always liked Leah even though she was angry all the time I wanted to hear more of what she was feeling inside so I really liked your story.