aww! that's very good! Tell your cousin she did a very good job for me

Aw...so cute and so sweet!

i like this. it reminds me of disneys version of princes and the frog were she turns into a frog. how old is youre cousen.

mermaids can breathe air you know...like in the disney version, but very cute story

very cute! super cute! tell ur cuz she needs to write picture books! lol!

awww it is just so cute

haha, cute.

aww ao cute! love the ending :D "'Ahhh'" she cried. 'look what you have done to me!' then they lived happily ever after." haha so cute!

tell ur cousin that she creates great stories! good job :)

thats adorable! XD

that was cute, I liked it!

thats so cute.

This is so cute! Your cousin wrote this? I love it!

sha that's so adorable. its cute

Aww, that's so sweet.

I love it: "Ah" she cried. "look what you have done to me!"

then they lived happily ever after.

LOL :)

Cool story