|Reviews for Lineage|
| zxnightfox 10/7/12 . chapter 6
I LOVE IT!
| B. Oots 5/9/10 . chapter 2
I just found the story. I look forward to reading more of it ASAP.
| un7derestimated 3/10/10 . chapter 10
What can I say that I already haven't. I love this story Jenna and can't wait to read the sequel. That's it this time, just short and sweet, with an over I loved it...:)
You mention that you would like suggestions, I was thinking that Jack not winning the game against Colin could be the beginning of the side effects of Fi's spell being lifted. Would really like to see Fi just practicing with her new found magic abilities and maybe even Molly joining in. It would also be funny to see Jack just accidentally make stuff happen.
| un7derestimated 3/4/10 . chapter 9
Good morning :) First I have to say BRAVA!
If the show would have gone in this direction, I believe it would have had a few more seasons.
This chapter was excellent. Again, I am amazed, at how easily you are able to draw me into the feelings and emotions, of the characters.
Fi and Molly's reluctance to even think of telling jack was done perfectly. The Nora and Molly moment, with Fi and Kathleen leaving them to hash it out, seemed so real. I could picture it happening.
The raw emotion, that both Fi and Molly would have felt, when Kathleen was talking about the normals being humans and the realization that they were different was conveyed just right. Molly being the more uncomfortable of the two and the fact that she physically reacted with gasping and turning pale made perfect sense.
I was right there while the spell was being cast, or at least I felt like I was. I totally loved the way you described Fi's heightened senses when her powers were released. Over all This was my favorite chapter.
I put all 9 chapters together and made an MP3 of it. I re-listened to the entire story before writing this. Yes, I did actually read chapters 8 and 9 :) The story is 2 hours and 58
minutes long. I agree I should read more books, but for now your stories are what interest me. Thank you for what you do. Oh yeah have a great time next weekSo sad I can't be there.
| un7derestimated 2/28/10 . chapter 8
A much slower paced chapter. I guess after the night before some calm time is necessary. Favorite line so far. "Suddenly, she realized the odd situation she had found herself in, and couldn't help but smirk. So this is what it's like to be Fiona."
The time with Jack and Colin was great. It was nice to see jack get some serious time. It doesn't happen often in the show. Waiting to find out how they break the news of Jack possibly having powers too. Still hooked and craving more...
| un7derestimated 2/26/10 . chapter 7
Well, is it So Weird, that after a week of LIFE kicking me in the gut, the first thing I do is check my bookmark for Lineage? Thank you Jenna, I was pleasantly surprised with two new chapters. Chapter 6 was great. I especially liked the way you had Molly slightly hesitant, yet willing to come across with what had happened with her Phone. All of them gathered together looking through the old papers was a brilliant lead-in for what was to come. You are so good at portraying the feelings and emotions in your writing. I could picture them stting there and the looks that they each would have on their faces.
This one really got me. Molly's thoughts of what if! in regards to Rick and believing him. Could she have helped him and even saved him from the accident? Her new ability to believe Rick could possibly hear her, was heart wrenching. Again your ability to make me feel like I am there watching it happen is amazing. I felt Molly walking through the house looking for Fi. I could feel the emotions she felt when she found her, in the living room. The conjuring of Morai, purely by accident, was brilliant. I felt chills as I sat with them, looking at and through Morai, sitting across from us. Your imagination never ceases to amaze me Jenna.
This would have been the best episode of So Weird if it could have been. This would have hlped the series stay on longer for sure.
Thank you again for introducing me to Fanfics.
| un7derestimated 2/15/10 . chapter 5
Wow! Very cool. I was hoping that Nora would have an impact. That short period she was in the story and she has changed
everything. Nora's ability to introduce some tangible proof that magic was real was a great way to help bring Molly and Fi
closer and even make Kathleen happy. So cool how you had Fi and Kathleen going through the stuff and breaking off into their own little sub-stories or thoughts. The way you had Molly have that OMG! moment was brilliant. I could so picture Molly thinking and talking to herself as all that was happening. Again, I have to say you are destined for great things Jenna.
| un7derestimated 2/7/10 . chapter 4
All I can say Jenna, is that this would have made for an amazing in between episode. This story so far has given so much to the final transition of Fi leaving. Now for the review and I have to be brutally honest. :)
Chapter four was great, listening to it with my eyes closed allowed me to envision the meeting between Nora and Molly. I swear I could even see their expressions. Your ability to paint the surroundings and feelings for that confrontation was excellent. Nora and the surprise ring removal were genius. I am loving this more and more and can't wait for the next chapter. Sorry for such a mean review WINK WINK :)
Sorry if you feel I am cheating by listening instead of reading, but for me it works best. The ability to visualize your words makes it that much more real.
| un7derestimated 2/3/10 . chapter 3
Great addition, seemed like a lot of info with no Paranormal stuff happening but it ties more together. Hoping Nora does have some real meaning to this. Her character was not very important in this portion. Need more... Damn you for getting me Hoked.:)
Kind of accepting Molly more now.
| un7derestimated 1/27/10 . chapter 2
My god, another one out of the park. I seriously can't believe, how you can make me feel like I am watching the episode, as I read. Your attention to detail is amazing. Even calling Colin Da. Your ability to open your imagination is a gift, I hope you can share this gift on a bigger scale soon. Peter if you read any of her stuff I am glad I helped point you in her direction. MORE!
| cherrygurl1225 1/24/10 . chapter 1
Oh, yay! Another So Weird fic from you! Guess you have a lot of fic writing time, huh? I'm SO excited that you're writing this and I totally remember the episode you're referring to!
Now that Fi has made the revelation to her grandmother, I'm really curious to know what will happen next. I wonder if the demon will come back and attack Fi's whole family or just go directly after Fi again and what part Fi's father will play in this story. I definitely believe he is still watching over her.
I am an Annie fan (mostly because I've been a singer since 3rd grade and I LOVE the spirit animal storyline... I actually have a spirit animal! ;)), but I definitely like Fi better and I think the show was darker and better stories were told with Fi around. I almost wish there were stories with both Annie and Fi together (at least a few episodes) and they could share in their different paranormal experiences, but since Fi gave Annie that ring, I guess it was her turn.
So Weird was the best show on Disney! I miss it so much and I thank you for what I know will be a wonderful fic! Can't wait to read more! :)
| Ares' Warrior Babe 1/24/10 . chapter 1
Love it! I love Molly's parents! And Molly's gonna have a freak out!
I'm working on more of my story too!
| un7derestimated 1/24/10 . chapter 1
Oh great now I have to watch all the episodes ;) Thanx for introducing me to this old new show.
The first chapter is a great start, I like the way that you are showing the apprehension of Molly. Digging into the past and trying to show what and how these abilities came to be, is brilliant. One thing that I did not understand though, is that so far none of the things in the episodes I have watched, have shown deadly intentions. I will need to watch more I guess. So far this is great. Want more.:)