hahaha that was hilarious

"I WANT A DIVORCE THIS WOMAN MADE ME PREGNANT"

hahah poor fate being punched by nanoha and screaming for a divorce :)))

poor doctor retiring because of nanoha scring him :)))

is there a sequel? if none make one i really love this story haha

hope to read more nanofate fanfic from you (_)

_ i loved it hahaha how scary and funny it is in having labor o.O its scary if its nanoha :P

Such a heartwarming and funny story xD. Funny how Arf and Fate being a punchbag for Nanoha xD;;. Love this story and hope you'll write more soon :D

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This fic is beautiful.

It's strange how reading such a little thing can make someone's life a bit better. Thanks a lot Alavon, I really really liked this short.

I'll be looking forward to your next update/fic then. Your new ideas look very nice, I hope that they turn out fine and that you can have a good time writing them.

Wow! It was really heart warming. I liked it a lot!

ah this is soo cute! so funny that arf got knocked out. i don't think nanoha has ever fought her. i think this is the first punch she got in on arf. ha

i'm definitely looking forward to your other new stories...of course after your other 2 ;P yea yea thanks!

Great little ficlet, Alavon, I love it !

Aww, such a lovely family. Nanoha looked scary when she was giving birth. LOL

Great and tender and sweet... and funny too :D. I really like your little family stories, they are touching .

Wow, you have some good ideas to write in the future :)