Simple, short, and well done.

But...didn't Picc's body disappear when he died?

Wow, what a great story. You did very well.

I love it when sudden and dramatic realization sets in, you did a really great job.
~Daffodil

This was fantastic! You know how to tell a story. The look inside Goku's mind when he realized what had happened was awesome.

Very cool and well written

Quite good.

wow...that was soo good! very well written, i could easily feel the emotions goku was feeling, great job!

*sniffle* Yay Goku!

*sniff* That was so beautiful! You portrayed everything so well...*sniffle* Keep up the amazing work!

*pathetic sniffle* Oooh... it was awful when Piccolo died. I mean, I knew he'd come back and all... but... you really know how to write. *sniffle* I thought I was over it, but this... this brought it all back, heh. *smile* Well done, Onyx-sama.

*sighs happily* what can I say? Your great at this stuff!! This is one of my fvas already, too bad its so short, but the shortness of it just adds to the....GREATNESS of it. It was simple, straightforward and to the point, I loved every minute of it. I love your word usage....you sound practically like some midevil bard, and thatw what I love. Thanks for all your Piccolo stories, i love em all! I ahve more to review! See ya! God bless~

whooooo hooo!

Good job, I just watched that episode today(kept missing it :frown:).

I liked how you imbellished upon it.

That was absolutely marvellous.

Wow! Another great read!! You definately have some real talent. Makes me wonder how old you are... I WANT TO CATCH UP TO YOUR ABILITIES. Ah, but I am at the wee age of fourteen... mucheth time to get better at writing. Looky here, you've INSPIRED ME! Good Onyx, good! ~Gives Onyx milk bone~ There's a good Onyx!! Er... ^_^** Anyway, great stuff!! Especially considering you said it was sort of old. Very good!

You know, Onyx, You were the first author I checked out when I discovered ff.net, and naturally read all of your stuff. It was back before I understood the 'review' thing, really, and so I'm going back and giving you my feedback on them all. :)

This one - I LOVE that you address Goku's sentiments towards Piccolo. How ungrateful would he have been had he not recognized the hand Piccolo had in Gohan's upbringing? I loved the whole thing - the line about Piccolo having finally taken off a mask in death - especially stuck out to me. Just wow. The whole thing, wow. I love the depth you give to our favorite characters.