|Reviews for Breathe In, Breathe Out|
| 21me21 8/12/12 . chapter 1
Nicely done! d_() -thumbs up emoticon!
| kittyzero 3/27/12 . chapter 1
Mnh I loved it c: You did great for not having written in years. I really enjoyed reading.
| maravelous 3/26/12 . chapter 1
Faaaantastic. For not having written a lemon in a long time, this was SPLENDID. I love it! You did indeed balance the plot and the lemon out well. Which is rare! Great job.
And yay for shameless smut. We all love. it. XD
| Azh Hikari 5/5/11 . chapter 1
Wow, this is Hot and Sexy! Thank you for it
| Song of Scrios 10/21/10 . chapter 1
(two thumbs up)
this pairing definatly needs more followers!
i loved the fic 3
| Zoomi 9/11/10 . chapter 1
I just had a sudden urge to read a Neji/Shika and by that specifically with Shikamaru as bottom. It's apparently uncommon as it took awhile for me to stumble upon this beauty but I'm super glad I did. I love this fic. I think I have a thing for dirty-talking Neji. :D
I definitely loved these lines:
"Why was it that gay men liked doing this—
Oh. Oh. That was why."
And the fact you kept them in character and there was plot makes this a prized oneshot in my book. :D Can I hope for more fics for this pairing? *puppy eyes*
| WritingAsAPleasure 8/23/10 . chapter 1
This was reallly good
| Gold Violet Eyes 7/20/10 . chapter 1
WOW! I'll say you did. This story was very well written. Next time, for another Shikamaru and Neji fic, have Shikamaru and Neji switch to where Shikamaru is on top and Neji is on the bottom. And make their sex scene somewhere either within the Hyuuga compound, or inside Shikamaru's apartment that he moves into from leaving home. Have Shikamaru use his shadow technique's to bind Neji to the bed and have his wicked way with him. Also, if it's not too much trouble, have Neji cross-dress in something cute, but sexy. That's all for now.
Gold Violet Eyes
| ranchan-akari 7/18/10 . chapter 1
THIS WINS. I don't understand why people always insist on Neji being the bottom simply because he has long hair! Shikamaru would totally do better as the bottom! And Neji is a dominant bastard anyways so yeah. ;D LOVED THIS!
| Anime Freak456 7/11/10 . chapter 1
Oh my... That was... HOT! i loved this! I haven't read many M rated Yaois, well actually this was the second but this was... amazing! I like your work. you are a very talented author. keep up the good work
| AzureInfinity 6/29/10 . chapter 1
''Why was it that gay men liked doing this—
Oh. Oh. That was why.''
XD I loved this one-shot, you AU'd them both perfectly, without slipping into that damned OOCness that most authors resort too to explain anything weird that happened.
| AlisaLovesYou-O.o 6/19/10 . chapter 1
i LOVE this pairing! it's so cute! but there are barely any stories about it :/ You should write moree ! :D :D :3 x3 PWASE ? (it was a VERY good story, and a very good lemon! i really liked it a lot, you are an awesome writer[:)
| Crimson Lawliet 6/10/10 . chapter 1
This has to be, hands down, the best NejiShika I've ever read in my entire life.
AND IT HAS A PLOT.
Thank goodness! You're an excellent writer and I have absolutely nothing to complain about.
I love how their characters stay in place, no matter how out of character they COULD have gotten, they stayed in their normal places. That was just pure awesome.
Thank you for writing this. It made my night just that much better.
| HiDiNgFrOmYoU 5/6/10 . chapter 1
-wolf whistle- Go Shika!
| mayfaire 4/18/10 . chapter 1
Yes, you've written a pretty good lemon and yes, this pairing needs more love. Love the setting and the atmosphere you've built in the story. Shikamaru easily coming to terms with what he wants in the end is a good one.