It's poignant. Very silent, and graceful. Just like O-Ren. Keep up the good work.

Well written. Excellent

Very insightful and intelligent. Keep writing

awesome! very descriptive!

This was really good and very well-written. It was creep and real. I like how you wrote this scene about O-Ren, and how you described her having to act the part when luring Matsumoto, how her parents died with their secrets, and the hate she feels. That was really deep-that no matter how much O-Ren killed, the emptiness remained. I like how in the end, she meets Gogo, and understands her right away. Great work. Just one question...the fic is mostly written in 2nd pov and then became 3rd pov at the end. Was this done on purpose? Just wondering. Overall, great work!

Brilliant.

That was really good. I really liked how you described everything in detail. Awesome work. Keep it up.