so beatiful and perfect *-*

Sweet.I-enjoyed-it.

I liked this one a lot! :) It described their feelings perfectly and the tension was thick.

Like I mentioned with one of the other stories, some of the cliche descriptions take away from it a little bit but besides that, this was great!

I really enjoyed it, wonderful job!

- Nini

Oh wow, this is very eloquent, yet simplistic and beautiful in its simplicity. Absolutely gorgeous piece, thanks!

DFC

Really, there are no words to describe your elegance and prose. I admire you and writing deeply. Thank you.

love this story. such a beautiful piece with so many good metaphors and images

Oh man, I loved this! So beautiful! I will definitely check out your other stories! Be proud, Clearheart, you have another fan! _

-Your Friendly Neighborhood Pyromaniac

Fire

An amazing oneshot! Really really cute and would be what happened if Sakura and Kakashi were to get together.

In a word, beautiful...

Sighh..oh yes :)

Very cute!

I love the way you write the tension here, bringing in the air and the elements to show it. The mix between Sakura being so sure and yet unsure at the same time rings true to her character, as well as Kakashi trying at first to put it off on her and blame her youth.

My favorite part was that even that one kiss WAS the beginning of something epic, as is so common in manga/anime, you didn't write it like it was inevitable. There's a story untold here and I enjoyed that hint.

Thanks for sharing. :]

Oh, this is beautiful! Playing to your strengths- sensory description. Loved it!

One question though- why nineteen?

Eldr :)

Oh sweetie, this is so beautiful and intimate. I actually felt as I though I was prying on something rather private. :$

The way you capture Sakura's emotions is just plain gold. Her confusion, her hesitance, her assured-ness, her realization - I didn't feel for a moment that I was reading the words. I was there in Sakura's head, feeling everything she was feeling.

Beautifully, beautifully done. :)

This is super-fantastic! I love how you wrote this in 3rd person, so detached from the characters, and yet it's so emotional the reader is drawn in.

This wasn't terrible. I feel as though you slipped a bit reaching the climax, but that happens sometimes when you're excited about the outcome, especially something that is so emotionally charged.

I think with practice you could be a very effective writer. Thanks for giving me something to read between all the author-injections and similar garbage :)