Oh. My. Gosh. Kaylee. -shrieks- IT WAS SO FREAKING INCREDIBLE AND I FREAKING LOVED IT SO FREAKING MUCH! [/end freakout session] ...huh. is the word freak starting to sound weird to you? xD

Wow. I'm so odd. O_o

ANYWAYS. Sorry this review is so late in coming. And, like, seriously, I'm pretty sure this is your BEST fanfic EVER! (I probably think that about every new fanfic you post, but that is besides the point right now.) I swear. This was absolutely PERFECT from beginning to end. (Except for a tiny few grammar mistakes, but I'm sure no one else noticed those, and even I didn't mind as much as I usually do because the fic is so amazing!) It had me totally riveted. I kept shushing people who I'd been talking to (not too kindly, I might add xD) because I was SO wrapped up in the story.

OH, and CONGRATULATIONS on your first M-rated scene! -squees- I think you most DEFINITELY wrote it well! It was perfect! I loved it! :DD And I'm so proud of you of you for posting it, 'cause if I ever wrote one I would probably NEVER have the guts to do so, ahaha. And I totally can't wait for more scenes like that in HeartWare. ;D lmao.

And um, okay, this is getting long, but I also just wanted to mention that you are SO amazing at writing Oliver. I mean, you always have been, but this fic is just another amazing example of it. :D And since HeartWare is in Miley's POV, it's nice to read something of yours in Oliver's again. :] Not that I don't love HeartWare, because I DO, and you know that, and you should so totally update it! But haha, you get what I'm saying. Right? x]

Yeah. I'm beyond the point of rambling now. So I'll just end the review here, I guess. xD THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR POSTING THIS, YOU AMAZING WRITER YOU. xD

Love yaa,

GiGi

Yo,

this was FAmazing. Really.

I loved it. No grammar issues, nothing.

Fantastic, and keep up the good work.

:D

Aww wow amazing

It was great.

Terrible? No way

Gross? Not even, that's life hun

Too discriptive or not discriptive enough? No just the right amount of discription.

If you don't mind maybe you should write like a one-shot sequel to this maybe.

Oh and update on heartware as soon as u can.

Well I think you did absolutely fine-no AMAZING. I love your Moliver stories to be honest. I think you're the only one who can make me fall in love again with my first favorite couple on Disney. But anyway, my favorite part was when they were playing the game on the bed. I thought it was pretty funny. I love this story, and you wrote it beautifully. Not too much, not too less. And I can't wait for your next chapter of HeartWare by the way!

its reely guud but needs more description...i gess...more...lemons!heheheheheh

Gaah. This was amazing. Ep. I loved it!

You shouldn't be self conscious about anything you write because it always turns out amazing!

The scene was so good and well written!

YOU SHOULD MOST DEFINITELY CONTINUE THIS! Like, forrealz. It's so good. It's different and original.

At first I didn't want them to, because, like, I love Lilly. But then I didn't care and was all 'hell yeah!'

Anyway, yeah. This was fantastic. :] Please do more! But like, if you don't have time, that's cool too.

Ahh. Kaylee that was awesome. xD I was trying not to laugh through the whole first half b/c I'm kinda supposed to be getting ready to go to a visitation, but I couldn't help it. Their conversation was hilarious. He's kind of a dumbass, for not realizing who he's destined to be with until now. *sigh* But this story makes up for it because it's awesome. I loved it. :) Great job.

OMFG! KAYLEE. this was amazing. It was honestly really fantastic and just all around beautifully written. It was pretty funny too. Miley's behaviour was suspicious from the start, I think. x]

haha and omg, the 'scene'. :P THAT was really good. You underestimate yourself, dear Kaylee. :P I don't feel comfortable writing what my favourite part was due to the fact that I have losers reading over my shoulder. *glares*

haha, anyway. this was really amazing. :) you've really got impeccable talent. sheesh.

I can totally picture this if Hannah Montana was not a Disney show. :P :P :P haha, Oliver succumbing to Miley's (sorta) subtle seducing.

Grr. You make me jealous with your fantastical writing. ;)

you should definitely write more of these types of fics. ] *cough* Especially this rating. :D

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Theresa

PS. definitely can't wait for an update of Heartware now that you brought that up. ;D (STILL WAITING FOR THAT CHAPTER, AND NOW THAT I KNOW YOU HAVE THE ABILITY, I'M EAGERLY ANTICIPATING IT) :)