That is the most horrible English I have ever read. Ok, so it was a translation?... so what get it right next time. Mila Kunis? Solara, damnit! Too short and way too basic, even for a bad translation. Final word? Just lame.

That had to be the most stupid piece of crap (not even worthy to be called literature or even a short story for that matter) I have ever read. For one learn how to spell and two don't write if you don't know how to.

Bs,,try again

What.

Dude that was terrible, for both you're poor knowledge of the English language and from what i could read it didn't really have any depth to it.

To convey a message in English, you first have to master the language...no offence...I kinda got what you were trying to say but it would be better understood if the language was a bit clearer...and like I've peviously said, no offence. Appreciate the input none the less.

who wrote this freaking 6 year old. multiple spelling mistakes and half of it didn't make sense

Lol

I'm sorry!

I don't like this!... But you can keep trying!

Bless you!

Dude learn how to spell

LMFAO! This fic had me cracking up from the beginning. Definately do a sequel.

Either you can't spell for shit OR you need to stay off the computer when you've been drinking !

-_-

Blatant troll fic.

not to kill your writing spirit but you need more help and time to master the english language AND also have someone help proof read your material. The only way to get better is to write write write ( and PROOFREAD)

Learn english before writting it. Please.