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| Jennifer Campbell 2008-06-22 ch 1,  | abuseI've read few S/V stories as entertaining as this one. Fun premise, good writing. I'm glad I came across your story. And *of course* he'd pass out -- how else could it end? -- but it sure would be interesting to know what awkwardness ensues the next morning. |
| SERENA 2008-03-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseThere are some miniscule errors and you do shift from first person to third person narrative but this is still, one of the best comic fictions I've read to date! I especially loved the fact that you've made Vaughn sound so sloshed! In the mean while, none of the characters stray from canon. Lines like these: but he looked like the construction worker from the Village People. ... are GOLD! Good stuff. |
| Stephanie 2007-07-10 ch 1, anon. | abusei read this and loved it but i felt that it needed to be continued and since its been a long time since you wrote it i didnt think that you would continue it so i had to i hope you dont mind if i post your story with mine so people know how it started i promise to give credit thanks for the amazing story |
| Yukiru-4-eva 2006-08-16 ch 1, | abuselol that was the funniest thing i have ever read! plz plz plz continue! PLEASE! |
| KaNia 2005-11-05 ch 1, anon. | abusePlease, continue. I beg you. It's great, fantastic, awesome story! |
| Erica Douglas 2005-09-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseAh! I hope there's more! What happens when he wakes up? Does she cuddle with him all night long? |
| otahyoni 2005-07-10 ch 1, | abuse[giggles] That was hysterical. |
| oddie562 2005-05-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was a great story i loved it it was funny and interesting i would love a chapter 2. |
| omg 2004-11-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseHa ha. This story was awesome! I love the punch and the passing out. |
| Jinet 2003-02-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseoh, why did he passed out? that would have been a hot night. please do continue. another chap. please? t/c |
| KaCe 2003-01-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseBwah ha ha! That was the funniest and best S/V piece I've ever read. |
| rubykate 2002-11-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. This was probably the funniest thing I've read in ages. I was literally laughing out loud through most of it and it was a much-needed break from all the angst of Alias. Good job and please write more if you can. I'd love to read about Syd's reaction to Vaughn passing out. |
| Sk8er Chick 2002-11-12 ch 1, | abuseI like it! you should write more and this should happen in Alias, minus the drunk part hehe. |
| Anki 2002-11-05 ch 1, | abuseThis was hilarious, and with such a romantic ending too Are you planning on writing a sequel about what happens when Vaughn wakes up?? |
2002-10-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseLOL That was so hilarious!!!!You've got to write a sister fic where Sydney gets tanked and then goes over to Vaughn's!!!!hehehehe |