Oh Gosh! This is one of my favourite Within Temptation songs! I love what you did with it. We know she'll see him again, but at that point she didn't so the end part really pulled on my heart strings. Update soon! I can't wait for your next songfic!

Yay! You're back D

Great chapter! It was really bitterweet. You had all the emotions and everything in there that needed to be there. The last part (especially the last line) was Jenny down to a tee D I'd never heard this song before so I youtubed it, and it really fits them lol

"He still hurt when he thought of her. Still thought, why did it have to be her? Why couldn't this have happened to one of his exes? Why couldn't he just be happy? Why did she have to leave?" - aww! Gibbs deserves an Abby-hug!

Keep up the good work, and don't worry about not writing in a while - I'm kinda guilty of that too! :L x

Aww poor gibbs! that was cute...in a oh-my-god-im-so-sorry-for-you kinda way lol i know i might have said it before, but you should totally continue some of these! D you've got the prefect set up for a AU judgment day fic here lol

Update soonish! x

Yey! A part two! I love the way you handled this song, it's so sad and yet you still think 'but there is hope, right?'. Nearly dying of anticipation for the next part!

Lovely. Very sad. 'Never giving up their love even when there was no chance for a happily ever after'. Wow, Keep going! So true that she would have stayed if he'd told her. They would have opened up to each other. Oh well.

By the way, I decided to try Within Temptation so I went out and bought The Silent Force. I'm hooked now because of you, lol.

Great oneshot! very sad and depressing...but that was the point lol it was still cute!

"He still thought about her, even all these months and a new wife and divorce later." - it made me laugh (not sure if it was meant to but it did!) we all know she was the reason for marriage 4 and the reason it failed (well...one of them lol).

Can't wait to see what you come out with next! Hint to what the song is? lol

HesMines x

Lovely, both chapters! Seriously want to know what happened next in the first one! A bittersweet second chap! Very well done, you do songfics so well! I'm very jealous!

*squeals* amazing! seriously...not many people can pull this sort of thing off D you've really captured jenny well, and i love the last line x3

HesMines x

very well done... can't wait for more

Beautiful. And I admit to the crime of reading yesterday without reviewing. I heartily repent for my sins of omission.

Have you ever heard the song "Missing You" by Chris deBurgh? Because it literally could have been written for Jenny and Gibbs. Check it out.

Very well done on these so far, I'm looking forward to seeing more of this.

S

I hope this story is getting a second part.

For your own good.

I'm just saying...:)

I'm very tempted myself to write stories inspired by songs.

I just can't seem to find any time anymore. -.-''

xD

love it! the endings so aw! i dont know if theres a song you could continue it with or whatever...but i wanna know what happens next lol

a very jibb-y song is What About Now by Westlife ( watch?vkVoE40Yx65s)

can't wait to see what you come out with next!

HesMines x