XD! I SO imagine that happening!

Now that's just wrong... but funny as he** ! Good job.

That was NOT nice. Why can't they mix things up a little?

He punched Shaggy in the eye?
He will die now.

Oh the irony is strong with this one :P
Good job, brilliant ending xD

he punched him in the eye! lol i love how at the end he was like damn i lost my train of thought shaggy what was your plan? it was really funny! good job!

lol i just love reading this i fell bad for shaggy every time i read it. i know it an long but it still macks me smile

this was hilarious!

hahaha! XD funny!

HAHAHA. I'm literally laughing out loud. Good job.

HEY! Evil author pick on shaggy! Shaggy is awesome! :P

*Throws Virtual Rocks*

Funny in a cynical way

LOL, that was lovely. Wonderfully funny, do keep it up. And you're actually a fanboy? Well, now your type is rare, but I say to you dear sir, welcome to our humble little site. I hope to see more of your works, they're very well-written.

Sincerely,

NMW