I lik both of them but the 2nd one is more fluffy and i lik fluff :3 continue!

It's cute, go with which ever your heart tells you. And just a quick FYI (incase nobody knows), Hades was a Greek God, he's the god of the underworld, brother of Zeus and Poseidon. (Sorry, Greek mythology is one of my favor studies)

don't go that hard on yourself, it was really good you just needed a more suiting title and then it would be perfect. !_!

hope that helps

did he really say he did think haruhi was exy! wow... baka

This were so good .. I loved both of them. Either one could make a good story or one-shot.

hahahaha cute!

I WUVVLES IT! Pleasee, updatee! Remember I know where you livee! LOL!

I wanna 2nd (3rd) chapter! D: Please continue this AWESOME story that is filled with AWESOMENESS! (0)

I really liked this story! and i think you got the translations right. great job!

Don't tell yourself that you suck that just makes the story more depressing. A writer's feelings go into the story that they create. Even though it's not your characters the feeling that you have while writing will show in a story. So don't tell yourself that you suck. You just forgot we're just humans so chin up and remeber people do still read this.

Oh and if you think it's ironic that my pen name is I know.

this was very interesting i really liked it

I can't believe you sat on a straightener. Then shave the burned spot. *smacks four head* Silly little girl. And yes I want you to continue! Doi! And to the rest of that stuff I'm not going to comment. But I probably will. Later. Sometime. Idk. But all I'm going to say is this. Do you WANT another lecture? I didn't think so. See ya later!

I think it's awesome :) I always like when it's Tamaki and Haruhi, with jealous Hikaru ;P Yeah, so even though it was short, it was really good!

-giggles- Suck? Pshaw, I thought it was great. XD

I love it, Kylee! You better write more or I will bite you. Hehe. Jk, jk. You know I love you. You're my best budie pal friend yeah. Hehe. I remember I said that before. Well as I said before write more. Hey! That rhymes!