This is a good start (im guessing there will be more). Its just a tad confusing since its one big paragraph. May I suggest breaking it down into tinier paragraphs? Maybe a new one everytime a different person speaks.

Im very interested in the story now so you must continue!

CoMa

I like your idea.. yes, much I do.. write more to this! But PLEASE use paragraphs.. it's very hard to read the way it is now..