bwahahahahahahahaha! love it! you really got jacks attitude down pat! daniel's too. teal'c could use some work though. update soon and keepmon writtin'!

Interesting story, but where's the rest of it?

Please write more.

I love your story! its so cool! :D

hehe, i really like this fanfic. i hope that you continue it. the whole Jack and Sam thing was cute and i can't wait to see more of it.

That was really, really good! All the characters were in character and I could see everything that you wrote. I loved the way that you made Jack and and Carter a couple. Its obvious that they like each other.

I am just going to mention this because I think that its strange, I found your name because I looked up a 28 Day fanfic and I saw your review, so I decided to see what fanfics you wrote, when I saw you had a biography. I was comparing my favourite movies to yours when I got really freaked out. Anyway, I got really sceptical when you said the following, The Mummy (1 and 2), Chocolat, (I love chocolate not to mention Johnny Depp) While you were sleeping, (okay, totally love 'While you were Sleeping') Pirates of the Carribean, (johnny depp again) X-men (mostly two for me, Rogue/wolverine Rogue/Iceman fan), Pride and Prejudice(Omg! omg! Mr Darcy! Love him and Lizzie as a couple), Resident Evil. (I only liked the first one, the second one was missing a good plot)

Okay, your probably thinking that I'm weird, for putting that on your fanfic, which was a really good fanfic at that, but I just thought it was a bit strange so I mentioned it.

HEY WAY COOL!

Keep going please, I'm dying to know what happens next!

O'NeillRoxMyWorld

i hope the surgery goes well and things get better for you. This story is funny and I hope to read more later.

You repeated the entire first chapter :(

Anyway, I loved it and I need more soon! Thank you!

Oh, one more thing Dr. Fraser is written this way - Dr. Fraiser

Horus

hehehehe. Oh, that waz soooo cute. ( 8

ye i'm so happy you've finally wrote more. please give up everthing else in your life to finish this cause i think its so funny

Sounds good so far. I can't wait to see what happens. Good luck with your surgery and your health. Hope you feel better!

Yeah I hope you feel better. And Good luck with your surgery. The Fic is good PLEASE keep on writing.

This is fun! Please continue. But make sure to take care of yourself first, ok?

PLEASE WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER!

P.S

GREAT STORY

o i c