I like the story. :D It has an interesting start and you are wrapping the story quite well. :D I like your ideas and please continue soon. :)

Fav and alerts. :D

IS the story going to continue? And is this from The Child Theif by Brom?

Awesum story! Why do many chapters in one though? Other than that i really likes it. keep updating

wow it's really interesting. you should update soon, i can actually feel the character here. i really like how you presented it.

This is a good beginning to what looks as though it could be an awesome story. I loved the book it is based on and look forward to see where you take it.

Hey Bethany, Imogen here!. I see you added me to your favourite authors, so I added you too. I love this story :)