Great job. Love the emotion!

Wow, you've done a great job of capturing Amelia's thoughts during the book. Bravo, I really enjoyed reading this. :)

You portrayed Amelia very well. I like the ending. It really added a lot to it. However, Amelia first cut in the book...when she was 13.

wow laura this was really good i haven't even read Jodi Picoult's book and i thought that this was really easy to follow. i really enjoyed reading this extremely well written. anyway see you tomorrow! OH NO SCHOOL! ARH!

GREAT STORY now you have inspired me to read the book

Hmm. This was wonderfully written, Miss Kitty. I might even consider reading this story. Maybe not, though. Jodi Piccoult just isn't my cup of tea :(

Have you finished my stories yet? If not, then damn you. Damn you to HEELL! Ooh, guess who got the entire 'Shopaholic' series thing? That's right, Miss Bridgeta! ME! I absolutely adore that author. She's fantastic.

Anywho, see you on Friday.

I thought that you wrote Amelia so well! Especially that very end. And the line: 'I wonder how long it will be before I can look at a knife or a pair of scissors, or even a paper clip, and not immediately think: weapon.'

The only little thing was that you spelt separating as seperating (sorry, I'm a spelling freak!) Unless that was on purpose, since Amelia is only thirteen? Thanks for writing! x