"Time is a cold teacher."

Great paragraph in a great fic. Thanks, Ulisa!

cheets

argh! The suspense is killing me! Good job.

Mystic

The end is a bit confusing, Ulisa. Who has the 5 holes in 'em? And how can buddi still stand? Also, I can help you on some correct french spelling if ya like:) You did pretty good. I love Marie's part and frankly, I have no idea HOW yer gonna end up! Not knowing who could live or die is a sign that you are a good author. Not too predictable:) Like that:)

cheets

The more Emi's past unfolds the more we understand of her. It's great to find out what makes the villian think the way they do.

Mystic

Hm.. As far as Emi's past, she still seems lacking but you took the first step. You had Naomi ask why:) Good job. I just can't sort out the answer. And I wonder what will become of Cubbi!

cheets

THat is the single greatest moment between adult and child I have yet seen in a fic... Even between Ursa and Buddi, I think this one wins out in purity and realism. You go, Ulisa!

cheets

I can't get over how in your writing you can portray the profound feelings the adults are having for their cubs. Your writing touches the hearts of the readers. Excellent work!

Mystic

Whoa... *waits quietly for more MORE MORE!*

go cubbi! And neat twist, Ulisa, with Emi's relatives...

JG

I love the 'black light' mention:) But a, confused at the title puppy love. I would have called it something to do with Cubbi's Guilt, yes? Because Tavi and Cubbi seem too young for... adult feelings:)

cheets

I love the 'black light' mention:) But a, confused at the title puppy love. I would have called it something to do with Cubbi's Guilt, yes? Because Tavi and Cubbi seem too young for... adult feelings:)

cheets

I think this sums it up. Wow! lol! Keep it up! I can't wait to see how it ends!

Poor Cubbi! Can't wait to see how they get out of this one.

Mystic

This is great! Keep up the good work!

Mystic