Wow ! I can't wait for you to die of old age :D

Dreading? It's Kaguya! Any alone time with her should be welcomed, desired, and cherished! What's wrong with him? Don't tell me he's now more into undevelopped teenage Oni-girls, waaayyyy underdevelopped young-looking Kitsune grannies or cold-hearted with no personnality AND girl-obsessed (not to mention, incestual) ROBOTS! Yes, i mean Kos-mos. No, really, i like Kos-mos... but aschen is much, MUCH better... especially when she activates her DTD.

The extra was funny.

I enjoyed reading this despite knowing absouloutly nothing about Super Robot Wars

If this a first effort, it's actually a very good one. You seem to have captured Haken and Aschen's characters fairly well, and your story set out to do what the title claimed.

In short, looks promising. I look forward to more.