 Alicia 12/6/11 . chapter 13 Great story plot.
Please update when you can |
 Laurenmlbc 3/17/05 . chapter 13Hey! Great story. I was a bit confused at first but I caught on! Keep writing! |
 anon 12/6/02 . chapter 13 update! |
 Marian 3/1/02 . chapter 12 Please Please keep it coming, I totally love this story. It shows a really sensitive side of Carly and Jax. |
 Dontia 2/15/02 . chapter 11 This is a great story but I'm a bit confused. You started out with Carly and Jason having sex. Then she had pregnancy-like symptoms. Now Jason's hardly mentioned in the last five chapters and she's sleeping with Sonny. Not to mention this thing with Jax.
Could you please tell me where this is going? Cause as talented as you are, I don't like stories where Carly and Sonny end up together. They can be together a while, but not end up that way. A consequence of watching the show back when he verbally abused her on a daily basis. But please keep writing, you're very talented.
Dontia
P.S. I don't mind her ending up with Jason or Jax.
Dontia |
 Marian 2/3/02 . chapter 10 I luv luv luv this story, keep it coming please |
 Marian 2/3/02 . chapter 8 this story rocks. please continue |
 Chelsea 2/2/02 . chapter 7 I LUV THIS STORY! PLEASE |
 Dontia 1/31/02 . chapter 6 This is a great story. I just finished reading chapter six and can't wait for more. I hope you update soon. |
 Marian 1/27/02 . chapter 5 I really like this story,Please keep it coming. |