Trippy...makes you think, has your life all been a dream?

Before reading:

Wait, if it's "not going to be a fun ride", then why write it?

During reading:

I gotta say, i think this is my favorite line from Ash, ever; "Maybe the kidnapper wasn't the brightest tool in the toolbox"

COULDN'T FINISH IT. TOO CREEPY. O_O

Whoa...ahhh...whoa. That was really intense. I can't even describe it. Just...yikes. Good god...is he still dreaming? This was confusing(I assume that it was intended to be that way though) and quite the emotional roller coaster. Definitely one of the most intense stories I've ever read.

Whoa, it was really something.

IS HE DREAMING OR IS HE NOT...

STAY TUNED

XD

lol

WOW! What a complete MINDFUCK!
It's so creepy and blown my mind to bits. I always thought Ash's journey was just a dream or illusion of some sorts, that was my theory anyways.
The ending was great but it also got me thinking if he was in his illusion ;)
Great story! I love horror and psychological torture! Had me ' what da fucking ' the whole way :)

Loved it. Poor Ash, he was so confused.

Omg. There shoukd be a sequle. I no I spelled that wrong.

Creepy. I love it! Best poke-horror I've ever read! :)

I think I love you for writing this. Yes, I do.

It was not at all what I was expecting to read, but all in all this packed so much suspense and twisted psych into a short one shot. Mind blown. I can't get over how condensed yet effective this story is, you have written a perfect oneshot thriller, plain and simple. Again, wow.

What else can I even say about this? It was so clever and creative and it left me always second guessing Ash's own sanity, and that ending, OH, THE ENDING, was the prefect way to finish this off. I definitely got some chills reading this. It's just so good, I can't stress that enough. The descriptions just got me completely immersed, and that tension and conflict going on in Ash's kept me hooked. SO clever, SO twisted, thought out SO well.. your mind is at a different level of thinking than mine, and I'm loving it. Holy!

I hope that you love this as much as I do, because this is golden, and you should be proud of it! So, so proud! THIS is just great, and I'd like you to know that.

Thank you for making my morning! I'll be rereading this one for sure!

This was one heck of a one-shot story!

The psychological aspect of this story drew me into it. It's just so gripping... You always wondered what traps or horrible sights Ash would come across next...

*spoilers here*
The ending gives off the impression that maybe Ash's life was all a dream... After all, when he passed out and woke up again after escaping, only then was his mom and friends there.

It really made you think. ;)

*end spoilers*
...and I like that in a story! Awesome work!

This was one heck of a one-shot story!

The psychological aspect of this story drew me into it. It's just so gripping... You always wondered what traps or horrible sights Ash would come across next...

*spoilers here*
The ending gives off the impression that maybe Ash's life was all a dream... After all, when he passed out and woke up again after escaping, only then was his mom and friends there.

It really made you think. ;)

*end spoilers*
...and I like that in a story! Awesome work!

I really think you could make a nice sequel out of this, or if you decided to make it more than just a oneshot. That's what I suggest. The psychological horror here is to be admired...as soon as we're done running off screaming into the night.

Only thing I can think of to describe this is a SAW/Pokemon crossover (kinda is). Twisted mind games that psycho was playing. I NEVER want to see something this diabolical at night again...

That was an amazing story! I'm glad you make stories like this.

Not going to lie that was just some scary crazy shit right there.