Poor red, she shouldn't be blurb.

What do "arms akimbo" mean?

Wow, what a well-written story! Haven't seen Hoodwinked in a while, but this was great! Keep up the wonderful work. :)

cool cant wait 2 read more if you write more lol :)

So darn emotional! WAHH! T_T - good job

Very insightful. Keep writing

Hello there,

I'll just do my job as a beta/obnoxious nit-picker to help benifit this excellent One-shot: First paragraph "saddness" should be "sadness"; when Red picks up the flower "outter" should be "outer"; in the flashback "utencils" should be "utensils" and "openned" should be "opened"; last line "frgid" should be "frigid". Well done with the one-shot, you're very good at converying Red's emotions in that particular scene of the movie. My suggestion would be to go over chapters before posting them, to catch the wayward typos...

Haoy Reading and Writing!

MG#6