Lmao .. I knew she wouldn't understand XD

God, as much as I don't admit it openly to people .. I love that Jesse McCartney song .. its so simple and beautiful. Loved this!

this was very beautiful, and funny. i love yhr explanation at the end, it was perfect..

This is one of the funniest one-shots ive read in a loooong time haha.

Good idea! I would have never thought about something like that. Maybe Hika-kun should have thought about singing something in Japanese for her huh? Oh well I guess it went according to plan for Kao-chan, ne?

Ja,minna-san.

Good old Kaoru, here to fix his twins mistakes good oneshot!

hey omg. SO CUTE! in the beginning i was wondering if u were gonna make ur own lyrics for it or something then BAM jesse mccartney! LOL xD cute story btw

i love how you made it so that she couldn't understand the song.

:)

Great story! i loved how you paired Haruhi and Hikaru, i always wanted them to be matched together! i think you did a really great job, so keep it up!

kawaii! i absolutely LOVED it! i especially liked the ending when Haruhi keeps trying to reveal why she didn't get it, and then it just hits you: the song is in English! haha, another great oneshot that really captures the characters! awesome!

Now that made my day!

It's...awesome. Nice one!

Good job!

Omigosh! xD That was so adorable xD Like the sweetest thing ever ;P just like Hika to come to up with something as romantic as that but overlook the total obvious point of it being in a different launguage xD

Poor Hika :P Lucky he has Kaoru there to translate xD Haruhi was really cute too :P

Great one-shot! :D

Mimi x

You are a genius. That was so cute! :D

Oh my gosh this is so cute! its really sweet and i can so totally see that happening XD

I love it :D

Aw, that was sweet. X3 And I totally saw that not-understanding part comming. XD Because we I realized it was a Jesse McCartney song, I was like: "Wait, isn't that song in english? How would Haruhi understand that?"

Then when Haru said "I don't understand-" then I was like: "Hahaha, Hikaru. You're such a dork. XD"

And of course Kaoru goes and saves the day by translating the lyrics. Hikaru really woud've never pulled this off with out his twin. I think Kaoru is my favorite out of the twins, just 'cause I think he needs more love. 3

For the instruments I think you made a good choice. Although drums wouldn't have been my first choice for Kaoru, it actually fits.

The only other thing I have to say about this is that maybe you could fix the last half of the chapter by un-bolding the parts that aren't part of the song lyrics. It'll make it easier to read.

Other than that, this was a very cute fic. _

Mariel

Genius. It was in English. :)

I really loved it and the couple. Though, one question. Weren't some of the audience girls all jealous because of the girl Hikaru dedicated the song to, Haruhi. So could they understand what he was saying and Haruhi just flunked the English class? Or what?