Very good, great descriptions, gritty, yet somewhat tender.

Did I mention i was afraid of you? Because that fic made me very afraid of you...

Oh goddess do I ever feel bad for Scott. Was there a sequel to this?

Hmm, the Bobby/Remy scene was cute. Take that s an extreme compliment. I normally despise the pairing as "fan girl trying to hook two cute guys up with no prior history, who don't even really like each other, simply because they're cute guys". At least with Bobby and Hank you have a believable history behind it. But I digress, you at least attempted to make them more than that. Kudos

Very well written! Will there be a sequal?

That was very confusing... O_o

this is incredicle. the relationship between jubilee and jean, scott and logan, bobby and remy. this is beyond well written. please write more?

This was really good; extremely well written. Everyone makes Scott such a jerk, but you actually made me like him. Kudos. (P.S. I'd love to read more of this.)

Dark but wonderful. It made me shake and cry.

Dark and deep - I was spellbound. This screams for more. I want to know how they wound up there and what happens next.

Wow, this is really good. Very profound and well thought out. Telling it from Scott's point of view makes the story so tragic. The leader who can't be one.

Wow - this is such a powerful piece - I feel as if I have just been given a gift - thank you

Wow, great story. please continue it.

Dark but brilliant. Please, please write another part. I really felt for Scott and I love the way Logan was the one that was there for him.

This is very good.

whoa, dark. but i liked it. you characterized scott very well, i think. it was good where you put jubilee and remy in the same boat, most people forget about her past. nice work, can't wait for more.