|Reviews for Anything Goes|
| Ketsueki no Kuki 12/4/11 . chapter 9
... For your sanity and mine, update soon. PLEASE!
I was kinda hoping there would be more other-peopleXOC moments like Soda-Jane or Steve-Jane or Darry-Jane and Dally-Jane. That kind of thing. I don't really want it to be just CurlyXOC from here on out, but whatever you do, so long as you update, I'll be happy.
| Mopiece 10/30/11 . chapter 9
-"...boy his skin was really nice, I hadn't before. "
You left out the word 'noticed' in this sentence.
-"Shaking your head partly at his arrogance and partly at his driving."
You switched POVs in this sentence. I think you meant 'my' not 'your'.
-Anyways, I liked this chapter. It's a nice build up to Jane's relationship with Curly.
| Believe In Something Bigger 10/29/11 . chapter 9
YOU MADE MY NIGHT BY UPDATING THIS. (Well, sort of, 'cause I just got back from my homecoming dance and that's kinda hard to beat, so this just made my night ten times better!)
Jane like I always say is hysterical, but she's so realistic, too. She loves her brothers, respects him and doesn't want to make him mad, but she's torn between that and being the kid sister she is and wanting to piss him off sometimes for attention. I miss Mrs. Mathews, though, I hope we get more of her soon. (:
Oh, and Jane high is aboslutely classic! Ahahaha, and Curly kind of sorta takes care of her ... so adorbs. What a gentleman (kinda of) he is! I'm gonna love them, I can tell.
I'm so stoked for the next chapter and hope you update soon!
| cassy1994 10/29/11 . chapter 9
I love that it's so obvious what Tim and Marty were thinking when she came downstairs from Curly's room. And curly managed to get her stoned, that's hilarious!
| aero 10/29/11 . chapter 9
OKAY so maybe this review will suck right now so I'll leave an even better review later on. I don't know why you didn't like this chapter - it was good! It was hilarious and serious all at once. I know the point of this fic is supposed to be about Bitty's kid sister finding herself, and you're doing a fantastic job of showing us who she is. Stop being so hard on yourself. You know that if this chapter had sucked - or any chapter had, for the matter - I would be upfront about it and tell you. Well, this was far from horrible! Don't worry so much, boo boo. (H)
Yeah, I used an MSN smiley face, deal with it. BBFLS. HOO RAH.
Okay, anyways, Jane is hilarious. You know that. She is stupidly funny. Classic Mathews trait. I love it. She's like... got this almost dry humor at times, and she is so sarcastic, and she says things where I'm like HA, JANE. I was like that through this whole chapter. Just... HA, JANE! What a girl. I know you're always telling me you ain't witty, but you so are; you hafta be if you're writing a Mathews.
Curly. Curly Curly Curly. STOP IT. STOP IT. YOU ARE MAKING ME LOVE HIM. He is so charming and so smooth and just... I mean. *coughs*. Fuck Curly Shepard. Douchey little brat. *iz totally swooning over here* I just love how you characterize him, okay? There. I said it. How many characters have you made me like now? Soda, Curly... Did you make me like Ponyboy yet? I don't know. But your Curly is so... I don't even know the word for it. He knows what's up when it comes to the ladies 'cause he gets lessons from Tim and Marty. And Marty is like the biggest womanizer ever, so I dare say that Jane never really stood a chance resisting the guy. And he was so nice in this chapter! Giving Jane his bed and sleeping on the couch. Awh. AWH.
Okay, I know I already told you this, but fave line ever: "Trust me Mathews." Marty grinned as he made a fake camera with his fingers, pretending to snap a picture. "It's all up here," he said, pointing to his head.
HAHA! Motherfucking Martin Fox. I seriously almost busted my gut when I read that. It was perfect. Absolutely perfect. Such a funny guy. Them Fox boys. Nom.
I felt so bad for Jane in that part! Marty and Tim staring at her like HAHA YOU AND CURLY DID THE DIRTYYYY. I could feel her embarrassment! I really could. She gets flustered and irritated so easily, it makes me laugh. Sometimes I wanna be like TAKE A CHILL PILL, JANEY MATHEWS, but it's just who she is.
Oh! One little detail you added that I really liked was the crucifix in Curly's room. I don't know why, but it made me smile. I was like Awh, Curly Shepard and his crucifix. *giggles*
CURLY SHEPARD. The mother fighter. You just keep making me love him. He's all... being such a gentleman and stuff, bringing Jane her purse and giving her a ride and whatever. Why you gotta make him be such a nice guy, huh? Why you gotta make me like him? Why you gotta do me like that? LMAO. But seriously. You are doing a good job with him and making him out to be more than just a derp, like Ponykid said he was in the book. HERP A DERP. I... I like your Curly. *sighs* I ain't sayin' it again, either. *hmphs* He just so... I dunno. Likable. Is that a word? I think it is.
I know this review sucks. BUT THIS CHAPTER WAS GOOD. I don't know why you didn't like it. Maybe it wasn't as action-packed as the other ones, but it really gives us a feel for Jane and who she is and how her and Curly are developing this relationship. It's nice. SO KEEP IT UP AND STOP SECOND GUESSING YOURSELF BECAUSE YOU ARE FANTASTIC.
I love you tons and tons and tons and please don't let the next update take so friggin' long, you loser. LOSER, I TELL YOU, LOSER.
Keep up the good work! Oh, and update quickly. And did I mention update quickly?
ALL MY LOVE,
| cassy1994 8/24/11 . chapter 8
I actually like this whole relationship between jane and curly please update soon!
| Jashin worshipping Jaganist 7/29/11 . chapter 8
Awesome,Can't wait to see what happens next
| beba78 7/27/11 . chapter 8
Is absolutely awesome!
And I agree with you
I'm glad you make the chapter a pretty decent length
But its not TOO long :)
I'm kinda glad you aren't pairing Jane with anyone from the gang
This needs great Curly Shepard fics
And you are doing a good job at it :)
Can't wait for the next one :D
| JandMbooklovers 7/27/11 . chapter 8
really really good update sooon
| Nishi911 7/27/11 . chapter 8
| aerodynamics 7/27/11 . chapter 8
- Angela is a cow, but I sort of like it. You balanced her out very well with being bitchy and then acting like a love-struck school girl around Dallas - which actually made my inner Dallas puke a bit. But yeah, your Angela is very annoying and I don't like her, but I mean that in a good way. Jane needs better friends, the poor girl.
- Okay, I'm sure you already know this, but I just fucking peed myself reading your Jane and Dallas interactions. Just... holy tits. And besides that, I really like your drunk!Dallas. He manages to be an asshole and be funny at the same time, which you wrote perfectly.
- Few lines that just made me howl: "It's between that broad in the blue," he pointed to a pretty brunette playing pool. I rolled my eyes as I grabbed his hand and put it back down beside him when the girl started to stare at Dallas pointing.
"Or that broad in the… blue," he said, not realizing they both were wearing blue; he lifted his hand again and pointed to a different girl standing over by the door.
Classic drunk move. The imagery was just hilarious. I could imagine the look on Dallas's face, and the look on Jane's face just being like *Lord have fucking MERCY*.
"Go for both, man," I said, mimicking my brother's laugh as I slapped Dallas on the back.
I did not see Jane doing that at all. I mean, I did, but I imagined Bitty doing it and was just like *Yeup... classic Mathews.* Love how you give them all these similarities.
"Ah," Dallas shouted. "Christ, you could wake the fucking dead with a voice like that. And the first person I'd feed them is you."
HOLY FUCK. EVERY TIME I READ THAT I DIE. Again, I just picture the look on his face like that MSN emote we have that's like D: and so it's like AH D: in my head. And what he says after is just soooo fucking hilarious. I love it. I love him and Jane and I think that they just kick so much ass together. But I feel bad for Jane having to put up with him.
- FUCKING RIGHTS DALLAS DOESN'T DO DATES. EVER. :D That's my boy. I just wanna huggle him.
- UM so basically I like your Curly. BUT - and please don't take this the wrong way - I found his character a little bit flat at the end of this. As I said, I do like him, I just think he needs a little bit more umph, if you know what I'm saying. I would just like to see a bit more from him in future chapters. AND HE BETTER NOT GET JANE IN SHIT. OR I WILL HUNT HIS FICTIONAL ASS DOWN. And I dunno... beat it. Or something. Yeah. That's right.
- Your grammar is always, always improving! So proud of you. Just watch your than vs. then. You mixed them up a few times.
You are doing an absolutely remarkable job. AND I LOVE THAT YOU ARE UPDATING SO FAST. Keep up the good work because your writing abilities make me jealous.
| Guest 7/27/11 . chapter 8
GREAT JOB! CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!:D :D :D :D :D :D
| Believe In Something Bigger 7/27/11 . chapter 8
YES! CURLY JANE 3
"...I knew it had seen batter days." -I think you meant better here.
I love Jane's thoughts. I've told you this before, but dude, she's freaking hilarious. We'd get along great Jane and I- if she was real, haha.
I really love the pairing of Curly and Jane. They are quite the couple. They have a lot more in common than Jane realizes I think, both are trying to break out of their big brothers' shadows and make their own name in the world. They both have the same sense of humor, too. This Curly is just ... great. I love Curly Shepard, but your specific one is topping my list basically, tied with Independence Undervalued's. Curly's like an ... orange, haha. He has a really tough skin and thick appearence, but he's totally sweet on the inside. (:
I love this story and can't wait for an update!
| Jesus Fucking Christ 7/26/11 . chapter 7
Hey. I don't know if I am allowed to have the word fucking in my name, but I do, so FanFic can EAT IT. :D
Okay, so, basically, I don't know where in the hell to start and am scared that my review is not going to be as epic as yours is. And I don't want to generalize, but I just loved the whole fucking thing so damned much.
I love Ozzy. I don't know why, but I just do. I think it's because he seems like a real person, and not one of those static OCs that people plug in just to fill up space. I mean, he meshes well, just fits in with the surroundings. But I can see he's kind of... thick, even though he obviously means well. OR I think he means well and maybe just doesn't know exactly how to go about it. He really just needs to know there are some subjects you don't broach with Janesaucers. DADS ARE A TOUCHY MAWFUCKING SUBJECT. Better learn to appreciate. OOH RAH.
Don't ask. What I mean to say is that I do love their fucking relationship because it is just soooo easy-going and casual and just makes it all so much more real. Lav lav lav lav lav lav lav.
OH and I really like the back story type deal you gave Janer's dad. Like a lot. It just makes sense.
KAY, NOW, EVERY TIME I FUCKING READ THE FIRST THINK DALLAS SAYS I LAUGH. HARD. "That's bullshit." LMFAOOOOOO. What a guy, what a guy! And I just fucking love him and Dallas together. They're hilarious. Dallas is just a grumpy face, and Two-Bit is like HA. They're very manly in this, bebe, and I love it and your ability to write manly man-ness... Does that make sense? I think it does.
Who the hell IS a fan of Sylvia? Nobody. She is a slutty slut slut slut ho bag WHORE. Actually, I am sure there is more to her, but I just... I just hate her. Writing about her makes me mad. So mad. I feel like I can never get how much I hate her down on paper properly, so that just ticks me off more, because I am like HOLY FUCK EVERYTHING INVOLVING YOU IS FUCKING COMPLICATED. HOLY SHIT. And yeah. I like how Jane doesn't like her. I guess that's the point of my whole ramble there. Just love me the way I am.
KATHY AND TWO-BIT. OMG. Every time I read that bit I just awhhhhh out loud. You make Kathy sound sooo sweet, which is totally how I imagine her. Two-Bit and Kathy FTW. YAY.
PS - Dallas and Two-Bit sexist pigs, and I just loveeee it.
Alright. And now onto the last part. Holy SHIT is that part ever fucking hilarious. How is it that you can write humor and I can't. I just love how bringing Curly along on business is the equivalent of bringing a girl. Really shows what people think of Curly. Even though I guess he was pretty clever getting Dallas and Tim together JUST SO HE COULD HAVE TIME WITH JANESAUCERS. What a toolbox. You make me love everyone. Fucking knock it off.
ANYWAYS, as per usual, great job. I loved it all - the characters, the plot, the writing, everything. KEEP DOING WHAT YOU DO BEST. I LOVE YOU ALWAYS AND FOREVER.
You know who it is. 3 MWAH. UPDATE SOON, FUCKAH. :D LAV YOU.
| Guest 7/12/11 . chapter 7
THIS IIIISS SOOOO GOOD! I'm happy this isn't following the whole plot of the Outsiders! I HATE thoses stories, but since this isn't one of them, I LOVE THIS STORY! MORE PLEASE! :D