|Reviews for Without A Cupid|
| Thundarr The Barbarian 4/2/10 . chapter 1
I have to say, good job for your first fanfic. I didn't like the movie, but I did like your story. I have to agree with some of the other reviewers though, you should really check your spelling and grammar.
Another criticism I feel I should mention, your naming of Kate's boyfriend. I know you're a fan of Buffy & Angel, I am too, but naming him "Angel Boreanaz" is (1) confusing and (2) lame. You could've named him anything and you chose that? There are SO many choices out there, you should do a rewrite with a different name.
| Kiera 2/7/06 . chapter 1
I haven't read it yet, but I will say one thing.
PERFECT disclaimer. I LOVE
| AnimusPatronus 8/12/05 . chapter 6
vey interesting...liked it hope yo update it soon!
| danceswpenguins9 4/29/05 . chapter 1
Hell yah David is drool worthy! The only reason I watched the movie...hehehehe. But good short fic yeps yeps. I have no clue how I found it, I was just looking around...
| Nightingale1408 3/22/05 . chapter 1
The whole story is very good. I loved it. But is that the end of it? Well, it's good anyway. Oh yeah, and drool worthy doesn't even begin to describe just how hot David Boreanaz really is!Keep up the good work!
| Jorge 7/25/04 . chapter 6
A very good story, keep up the good work.
| chris101 2/14/04 . chapter 1
this is very good for a first fic scale of 1-10 i would give you a 8 although most of it is straight from the movie so keep writing its good.
| Angelynn 11/16/03 . chapter 6
ah yes, David is VERY drool worthy, although so is James Marsters. very good but I just wanted you to know that you changed from Angel to Adam...not that it matters to me...I know what your talking about. -
| LilRayeofSunshine 10/9/03 . chapter 6
This is a very good prequal. I had never even thought to think of how he planned it out and all that good stuff.
And yes David is VERY VERY drool worthy
| Suerte 6/9/03 . chapter 1
Who cares about the spelling and punctuation! That fanfic was damn good! write more!
| Goblin Queen2 3/14/03 . chapter 6
I agree. Davis is very droolworthy. up the good work.
| koolperson1 1/21/03 . chapter 6
plz do more its really good!
| MORON 1/15/03 . chapter 6
you are such a moron! You change from Angel to Adam! Fuck'n retard!
| Maegannoniel 1/15/03 . chapter 1
THAT MOVIE SUCKS!
| Goddess of Torment 1/3/03 . chapter 6
Good story so far. I agree with the other people in that you really should beta-read your stories first before you post them. You have a good imagination... keep writing! :)