 moonmagik 10/31/11 . chapter 15I have reread all fifteen chapters again because that's how much I love this story. Hopefully you'll get the urge to come back and finish it soon. |
 You'llRememberMe 10/2/11 . chapter 15Umm I thought this story was really great, but are you ever going to update it again? |
 Seph 8/21/11 . chapter 15Since this story hasn't been updated since over a year ago, I guess it's not likely to ever continue? Sad puppies in the snow.
That is a horrible horrible loss. I really like your portrayal of the team and characters, and there's a lot of depth to the way you write Eliot. It's an intense tale, and your last chapter just indicated a new trouble arising!
I sincerely hope you'll one day get back to writing this story! Here's my adding it to alert with the vague hope that you one day will. Please update if you can! |
 Arkylie Killingstad 4/26/11 . chapter 15I've seen so many amnesia plotlines that pussyfoot around the memories ("let's not tell you that you're married" and such) that it bugs me, but that's just me. I think you're handling the re-education pretty well in this story.
Hope you haven't given up on it. It's a good tale and I look forward to more. Love the detail about critiquing crime stories on TV.
Let's see, criticisms. Well... not that the Leverage team isn't dumb enough to do this sort of thing in the real show, but... when you've got a Hitter who's mentally incapacitated and still healing from severe physical injury, and who's got a couple dozen hits on his head, and you've just made enemies of a Big Bad who might send any number of people out to find him, you do NOT go parading him around in the local mall.
Also... well, yeah, Eliot's got amnesia, and he's been trained to follow instinct and attack things, all that. I can see him not trusting people he can't remember. But I can't see him going "But maybe you're the ones who did this to me!" He's good at reading people, he can tell if they're the types to horribly torture people and then pretend to be friendly with them.
I'd love to talk to him after a comment like that. Lay out the logic of what he's saying. But anyway.
I hope you get back on the horse soon. I can't get enough good Eliot fics :D |
 Bron 3/16/11 . chapter 15 All 15 chapters. Missed work... Please update soon. |
 ardnaseel 3/3/11 . chapter 15I just read all 15 chapters, and I hope you are planning to update/finish this at some point because it has been EXCELLENT! |
 Nikolaos 11/5/10 . chapter 15I just read all 15 chapters. I'm loving the pace and energy this storey has. I'm glad you didn't drag out the rescue part, now i just wait in anticipation for when Eliot gets his memories back...
Tho I am intrigued, what was the number Tara picked up? Have I missed something? or are we still awaiting that reviel?
Can't wait for the next chapter, keep it coming. |
 TheNaggingCube 9/15/10 . chapter 15Know you are back in school, so hopefully you do well and can get time to write FF again for all your fans. |
 Culf 8/19/10 . chapter 15I'm enjoying this story so far, though I feel bad for poor Eliot. I hope things work out for him.
Looking forwards to the next chapter. |
 Ashti 8/9/10 . chapter 15 It's too late to log in and give a signed review, so this'll have to do.
Hey, your life sounds like it sucked for a while there! I hope you're better off now that you're in college, though the horse job sounded pretty fun, too, if you ask me. Well, not counting the wait time, anyway, heh.
Hope college is less of a waiting game!
I was just wondering if you're still working on this or if I should just skip on to another story? |
 ASiriuslyGleekyTimeLord 6/24/10 . chapter 15...Of course Parker does the Jaws music...of course she does...*shakes head grinning*
Wow, I feel bad for Eliot, and yet happy that he's starting to remember things. I can't wait for more! When you can get it up that is, no rush! |
 pdljmpr6 6/24/10 . chapter 15Awesome update. Loved the flashes of memory returbing to him and the timeline. A lot of things Most ppl wouldnt want to go thru once, the fact that Eliot has to go thru them twice just breaks my heart. And now crazy dude is coming To town. I hope he dies.
Have fun at the horse shows and working and college!
Pj |
 Shirley 6/7/10 . chapter 7 I don't think he sounded whiney. I thought you made him sound like the gentleman to women his mother raised him to be. Great story. |
 purplefeather21 5/26/10 . chapter 14I gotta say, I really like this story.
It's different than others. |
 BookLover223 4/27/10 . chapter 14I'm in love it's a masterpiece |