I'm not familiar with the base work, but this was stylishly written- very well done x

Striking imagery. Your words are dipped in both ends of the wick, so to speak, and your title is perfect, composed of so many opposites. It beautifully reflects the deep struggle in this amazing manga. Great job.

YES! A Basara fanfiction, at last! I knew I'd find one if I looked long enough! And a good one at that! I like how the style leaves it very open. This was a great oneshot! I hope to read more from you!

I love it! -

It's so sad and beautiful all warped together. I can see you chose the right words and was very particular with the imagery. Well done indeed.

O! Great job! A rare and beautiful find; a GREAT fanfic! I love it!

o.o

wow

thats so good

That was awesome. :D

Keep it up.

bloody hell is all i can say!

Oh WOW! This captures it beautifully! I've only read it up to No. 6 and I'm already hooked. This was wonderful! §

Oh wow... i really love Basara. But there's only two stories... :(

nice chapter. i sropped on volume 13 of the she really pregnant? update soon...

i too wonder what would have happened if she was pregnant during that scene but it never happened

thaks for the deep thought

i liked it, sarasa thinks this way a bit

i want to see shuris side now hehehehe

Awesome!Reallygood. Please write some more Basara fiction!