So good! Lovely. I'm all teary. *sniffles happily* See, incoherent now too. Cause it's that good. _

This was wonderful! Thank you!

The last two chapters were so amazingly beautiful but especially the last scene. Words cannot describe how great it is.. Oh wait.. Short and sweet :P

Perfect! Just perfect! 3

yay! That was lovely. Totally worth the wait, thanks. (And so much more mature than the outlined confrontation with Anderson I have simmering somewhere in the back of my head.)

And they sound kinda like Starfleet in my head too, so no worries there. Must be the vaguely similar sci-fi-pseudo-military thing going on? That or we're both just weird. _

Ah, what next? Poor Kaidan, poor Shepard. You've done a wonderful job capturing the mood and the back story. I can't wait to read what you have in store for them next.

Love, love, love your writing. I can't get enough of it.

That was an amazing chapter. Just hope you'll update soon so I can see what happens next )

Aw, that was wonderful, in a painful, sniffly, I-hate-Horizon-and-feel-horribly-for-Kaidan-and-Sh epard sort of way. I wish some biotic-Kaidan action had actually happened in the game, too. Glad he's as creeped out by Harbinger as the rest of us.

And I'll be waiting for the next whenever you can get it up. I can even pretend to be patient. ;)

Gah! Ok for the record, I've discovered 2 of your stories not. And both of them leave me hanging right before a reunion.. ARGH!

Update soon! You're killing me, dude!

LOL

Absolutely amazing. I think you capture Kaidan's grief perfectly and I love the angst. The added twist with Kelly is very interesting. I'd be interested to see where you go with that if you continue this fic, which I really really hope you do.

Great story! I sniffed my way through the middle chapters but had to laugh when the Dr was the sk nky Kelly. That came out of left field but fit really well.

Great stuff.

This is excellent. Almost made me cry at the funeral. I can't wait for more. I love Kaidan/FShep stories and this is an extremely well done one. Keep up the good work.

Arg! How much I dislike evil Kelly. Nice twist there though with making her the doc Kaidan goes out with - didn't see that coming.

Really enjoying the angst so far, as bad as that sounds, lol. But, alas, I am never contrary to fluff, either. Hope to see Kaidan find out the truth about Shepard soon. Keep up the awesome work!

I didn't mind Kelly but you almost made me hate her. Anyway, great chapter, I really liked his two male teammates and his friendship with Shep's mom. I'm looking forward to their meeting.

I'm loving this story, Kaiden is my favourite character from the games and this is an excellent take on his experiences while Shepard was dead and continuing soon I hope XD