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| Reviews for Meeting Mr Goode |
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   Zammie.Forever 4/8/13 . chapter 20is..is it over...IT CANT BE OVER! please please pleeeeease dont let it be over! |
| oolong-sama 3/19/13 . chapter 7 Okay. So, im loving the quotes/poems/lyrics, but they're kind of confusing. Put some gray lines in between the quotes and story so it's easier on the eyes...readers are lazy, and bad layouts are a big turnoff. Also, again with the OOC! You need to work on this! Lurch-tan |
| oolong-sama 3/19/13 . chapter 5 not logged in This is mediocre. Okay plot, okay ideas, but I definitely will keep reading. However, even if it's AU, you must remember to leave the characters IN CHARACTER. Cammie is so ditzy it HURTS, and Zach is a very cliche male spy. I recommend looking up 'stock characters' on TVtropes, so you don't fall into the cliche pitfalls. Otherwise, it's good. I like your descriptions, but a little bit goes a long way-it doesn't matter what clothes the characters wear, and neither does it matter where they get them from. Try to condense it-say 'branded jeans' instead of MissMes or whichever one you used. Best of luck, and I will definitely keep reading. You can find me under the same name above and PM me of you've got anything to rant at me :) Lurch-tan |
| Kyliesmiley2001 2/12/13 . chapter 20 Please make another chapter! I love this series! -Ky |
| Hazelnut Tre 11/1/12 . chapter 16 Wow... This story is really good! |
| BellaGoode 10/5/12 . chapter 1 Love it! I just don't like the fact you're talking in the 3rd person! I find it confusing! Could you talk in someone's point of view? X |
| jessiejellie 7/28/12 . chapter 20 love it! update! |
| SillyLittlePiggy 4/14/12 . chapter 20 Yay for Zammie! 3 I love how the characters are not OOC :) you're an amazing writer! |
| sailsix621 3/26/12 . chapter 20 are you going to add anymore chapters to this? |
| cutey3939 3/23/12 . chapter 20 Really good plz update soon |
| PonyInsane 1/25/12 . chapter 20 Please i'll do anything for you to finish this story please do |
| PonyInsane 1/23/12 . chapter 20 Please write faster or make a sequel because I love i mean LOVE this story |
| PonyInsane 1/23/12 . chapter 20 Please write faster or make a sequel because I love i mean LOVE this story |
| Nithusa 1/22/12 . chapter 20 i luv the fanfic, cant wait 4 update |
| fi13ns 11/15/11 . chapter 20 You are soooo creative! Cant wait to read more! |
