|Reviews for The Diner|
| I'm A Sucker For Love Stories 5/14/13 . chapter 4
Loving your story so far and will continue! In the meantime, I've been looking on your blog at your recipes and they all sound fantastic! I'm dairy free inclined, so muffins are usually out for me... darn that tsp of milk! So I was going to try a few of your recipes but am a little bit stuck. I'm Scottish and don't understand the cups system. Can you tell me in ml and grams what a cup is please? I'd be grateful for any help!
| TwiFanfictionRecs.com 3/27/13 . chapter 1
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| Toni Masen 2/26/13 . chapter 26
Mmm some of those cupcakes sounded too delicious for words. Wow a serious lack of being able to converse with each other, very frustrating for me the reader. I really liked this Charlie, not often I say that! Tears, yes you made my eyes well up several times, especially over the pearls. Good story, thank you for writing.
| Jaygm 2/20/13 . chapter 26
Absolutely enjoyed this story. Your characters and plot were perfect. Thanks for sharing this.
| Jaygm 2/20/13 . chapter 24
That girl sure takes her time!
| Jaygm 2/20/13 . chapter 23
Well, what the hell happened to James? That loser had better either be caught or dead. Sounds like he beat the crap out of her.
| Jaygm 2/20/13 . chapter 22
Story is great but this chapter was very depressing. James is cruel and relentless. Hope she can figure out something.
| Jaygm 2/20/13 . chapter 21
Geez- that Edward- just jumping to conclusions and saying things before he thinks. And Bella has now been gone for several days with that slimeball, James. Every day she's gone, the worse it is going to be.
| Jaygm 2/20/13 . chapter 20
These two are quite a pair- and now James has Bella.
| Jaygm 2/20/13 . chapter 19
So it was Alice's idea? Telling lies for whatever reason is not a good idea.
I am just waiting for James to let Bella know they are still married. She really should have checked on this when Charlie mentioned it a few chapters back. The fact that her divorce may not have gone through is critical.
| Jaygm 2/19/13 . chapter 16
Good for her- she let him hear her secrets and he didn't pull away. This is a huge accomplishment for her. Now let's just hope James doesn't show his slimy face.
| Jaygm 2/19/13 . chapter 15
The communication between these two is maddening. They both always seem to have excuses for not just getting it all aired out.
| Jaygm 2/19/13 . chapter 14
Well- good to see they said the words to each other. Moving along nicely.
| Jaygm 2/19/13 . chapter 13
Bella just needs to unload the story on Edward. At least now he has the gist of it- thank goodness that Alice let him in on that much.
| Jaygm 2/19/13 . chapter 12
OMG! Finally. . . now she just has to tell Edward. It was so foolish of her to keep this to herself. James could be very dangerous.