great story _

lol I loved that part of the manga, liked how you took the character for your story!

OMG! That was cute! I liked it a lot!

-Ahria

ROFLOL... hehe I love Lina and Gourry... they make such a cute couple...good pairing for making them togetther

What a pleasant short fic! Lina's typically overboard responses were great, though the images it conjured were downright... creepy... but no surprise she can find a way to achieve even 'ladylike' with massive overkill!

Very cute! I can just see the two of them doing that too. porr Gourry and Poor Lina trying to be girly and only driving Gourry nuts!

Very good fic, you're very good at keeping people in character. Another chapter would be nice _ Great work!

Awww, poor Lina. Again, the issue with her being attractive. Though I love her attitude through it all; "If I fall, you're going down with me". I don't know about the useage of "Gourry dear". I dunno, I just don't think Gourry would react to it as he did. I did love how he reacted to the dress and the SMILE. Plus his dilemma with Black Fox. I like how Lina and Gourry both agreed they liked it better when they were themselves and casual. Then again I liked everything about this fic and I could go over this whole fic and have a commentary for every paragraph. It really is one of my favorite fics now. But really, too much good stuff here to list in this little box. TRUELY WONDERFUL FANFIC!

AHAHAHA! Poor Gourry...

hee... wonder how he liked Sylphiel calling him Gourry-sama... LOL!

Cool fic. So kawaii I love how you did it.

Black Fox is cool. It's good to see him. I agree with Gourry; Sylphielish Lina is SCARY. _ Good stuff.

I love this one... it's a great way to play on the Black Fox chapter from the manga. I also liked the creepy Lina/Sylphiel "Gourry Dear" parallel... *shudder* Very in character, too. Keep writing, thanks!

Oh! This was hilarious! Both Lina and Gourry were very in-character, and I enjoyed it immensely.

this was so cute. I like the play on the "gourry dear" bit.