nice, couldn't see any errors, really characterized leon well and i didn't find it confusing at all

I really liked it! I think you caught Leon's essence perfectly, and you explained really well why he changed hin name (it has always been kind of a mistery). I hope you write more stories like this one :). Keep up the good writing!

Wow! I don't even have the words for it. I really like the way everything is discribed/written. There were just some tiny errors I noticed, but that's it.