I love this

For this, you get a huge, obnoxiously loud, 'AWWW!' Absolutely adorable. And much love to Kendall for his brilliant conversation skills ;)

Grrrr. That is NOT all I meant say. Apparently I pressed the enter key while the "Submit Feedback/Review" was still highlighted...

Anyways, this was simply amazing.

Kendall's crush on James was absolutely adorable & James kissing him back was perfect. Fantastic job with this! :)

Oh my gosh, that was just great. :D

I read this a long, long time ago, but I never got around to dropping a review. Despite this fact, it's nearly midnight and my head isn't working. Because of this I have no in-depth review for you.

I think it's about time I rectified my error in not giving feedback though, and I'd like to say that this was amazing.

Just wanted you to know :]

This sounds entirely strange, but I'd like to marry you.

No, honestly. This is one of the best Kendall/James stories I have ever read, and I'm quite convinced I've read every single one on this stupid site that I adore.

Your writing style is absolutely magnificent and it makes the story that much more enjoyable. I love the plot line as well.

I'm very excited to see more from you.

One Man Writing Games

It's like you had an idea and you knew what you wanted to say AND managed to still get the point across without your brain typing faster than your hands. I like and respect that. That which I find to be impossible for myself to achieve as of yet. Though... It seemed somewhat... lacking? I don't think that's the right word but I can't pinpoint what makes me think that. Maybe your writing style? I'm not sure... Nevertheless, it was a wonderful read. Not a waste of time in the slightest.

Wow, I love this. Like, a lot. I like the way you worked all the anatomical references in and still made it sound poetic and lovely. There were a couple of lines that made me stop and go 'whoa' and a couple of lines that had me flat out laughing, and I ADORED James's reaction at the end there.

Aw! This was such a sweet story. I loved it at the end when James kissed him back 3 Great job! XD

aw, how cute!

i normally don't like anything but Kogan, but this was really sweet!

This is made of cute. X3 In character too, which is tough with a small amount to go on of four episodes. :P Such a slashfest. It's great.

Dude. James wins Best Response to a Kiss. Ever. The aftermath of the kiss was the best part. And I usually hate the aftermath and only love the progress and everything leading up to it.

I loved how you described Kendall's feelings. The head-on collision, the technical heart stuff...just everything. They were all so different, and fit together so well. I got just how deep Kendall had fallen for James. Really, great job! :D

Aw that was so cute! I'm in the midst of writing a story about James and Logan, because there aren't any like that. Check it out if you have time :)

That was so... so... CUTE! I totally loved it to pieces! Great story!

I thought this was beautiful.

The way you worded Kendall's thoughts and actions with great detail was good...I don't know how to explain much (in fact I suck at explanations) but what I'm trying to say is that I really like your story and you did an amazing job! *favorite*