You where right it was cute please write more

I think... I would have had her come to herself and run away when he moved toward her, and drug it all out for a few more chapters. That would have given a bit more of a plot. Although it is *delightfully* done as it is. _ Lots of fun!

[Also, I can't help but put in a plug for my own Ami/Zoicite story, Untouchable. I made the mistake of posting all I had at once and... well, that always gets a story lost too quickly in the jumble of SM updates.]

THIS IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SWEET!

That was so sweet. General/Senshi fics are my second fav pairings, next to Darien and Serena. This story is perfect. Write more!

That was so cute! I'm a major Ami/Zoicite fan, so this type of type of thing is right up my alley.

So Sweet! I love it. Go Ami and Zoi!