|Reviews for In the beginning|
| Guest 6/11/13 . chapter 15
Please please please please please please please please please please update this soon! I love how raven is always teasing beast boy and doing little things to each other it is so cute! I love this and you haven't updated this in a really really really long time! Please please please please please please please please please please update this soon! You said at the end of this chapter that there would be another chapter! This is too good to end now so please please please please please update this soon! I beg of yee!
| PPGXRRB 4EVA 4/10/13 . chapter 15
| rawr3737 11/2/12 . chapter 1
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! SO GOOD
| xXimmortalXx 10/27/12 . chapter 15
UPDATE PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE!
YOUR A GOOD WRITER AND I WANT TO READ!
| Guest 10/23/12 . chapter 15
Amazing! Please continue
| lionDreamerAKAfan 10/16/12 . chapter 2
Oh BB, you screw everything up
| Guest 10/7/12 . chapter 15
love your story!
| inu-rulz 9/21/12 . chapter 15
WHAT?! that cant be it! i wasnt paying attention to the chapters...TT i hjate when that happens! happily reading along when suddenly...BAM! no more story! TTTT
| FelineWithAnAttitude 9/9/12 . chapter 15
can't wait til the next chapter .i had a guest over and still was stuck in the friend had to literally shove me out of my seat and away from your story your a great writer well see you at your next chapter
| Agent of the Divine One 8/17/12 . chapter 15
Raven can be such a tease when she wants to be. xD
And while the day did not go perfectly at least Starfire and Raven are still alive. Whether that remains so is another matter.
| Bulbajer 8/16/12 . chapter 15
Brilliant! I love the flashbacks especially.
| LadyFelton1994 8/16/12 . chapter 15
Question: did Bb and Raven actually got together? They r so popular on here and it's been forever since the show :p I like it so far please update more friend author and can u make a rated M one-shot for BB and Rae from this story that would be awesome! :)
| titanfan45 8/15/12 . chapter 15
The dream Garfield had regarding dessert was well written, couldn't help grinning as I read it. I do understand why you explained the cauterization of Raven's wound, but I will tell you that you wrote the chapter well enough that explanation was not really necessary, still; it was a nice touch. Great story so far and I'm really looking forward to seeing how this part of the story plays out.
| MelonLord28 8/15/12 . chapter 15
Holy crap raven destroyed him. As star would say, glorious.
Who is the traitor I must know1!1. I haven't slept in months wondering, hope you can live with yourself knowing that (lol)
| Katwizzle 8/15/12 . chapter 15
I loved the end! XD