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Reviews For: Shattered Images....Alternate Part 2....

salt boy
2008-07-05
ch 1,
abuseOh the plot thickens (sorry for the cliche). Keep writing this is great.
B Oots
2004-08-16
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis is a very good story, are you going to write another part for it. I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future.
Meg the fierce lady
2000-12-10
ch 1,
abuseI like the way this is going, write more neh?
Autumn
2000-11-08
ch 1,
abuseaww..sad, but good
Erik Bludau
2000-08-20
ch 1, anon.
abuseI liked it a lot. It will be intersting to see how the author continues this series.
S.Maldiva
2000-08-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseeeek! I LOVE this!! Eek! Please, please, please continue!!!
Lin
2000-08-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseHola mi amiga! *grin* Dude...if I get something wrong in that, shoot me 'cause I'm supposed to be at least a beginner in Spanish...(taught to me by fellow peers...)...anyhoo, liked this chapter. ^___^ I wanna see some more 'knife' action though. *cakcles* Me an' sharp things...gotta love 'em...anyhoo, wanted to also tell ya that changed my alias...^^; So sorry if I uh...confuse ya in the future...>.
Raist330
2000-08-12
ch 1,
abuseHow wonderfully dark. I'd like to give some constuctive criticism but I TRULY cannot find anything that is weak. Tight story, good characterization. Excellent work.
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