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| salt boy 2008-07-05 ch 1, | abuseOh the plot thickens (sorry for the cliche). Keep writing this is great. |
| B Oots 2004-08-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is a very good story, are you going to write another part for it. I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future. |
| Meg the fierce lady 2000-12-10 ch 1, | abuseI like the way this is going, write more neh? |
| Autumn 2000-11-08 ch 1, | abuseaww..sad, but good |
| Erik Bludau 2000-08-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseI liked it a lot. It will be intersting to see how the author continues this series. |
| S.Maldiva 2000-08-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseeeek! I LOVE this!! Eek! Please, please, please continue!!! |
| Lin 2000-08-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseHola mi amiga! *grin* Dude...if I get something wrong in that, shoot me 'cause I'm supposed to be at least a beginner in Spanish...(taught to me by fellow peers...)...anyhoo, liked this chapter. ^___^ I wanna see some more 'knife' action though. *cakcles* Me an' sharp things...gotta love 'em...anyhoo, wanted to also tell ya that changed my alias...^^; So sorry if I uh...confuse ya in the future...>. |
| Raist330 2000-08-12 ch 1, | abuseHow wonderfully dark. I'd like to give some constuctive criticism but I TRULY cannot find anything that is weak. Tight story, good characterization. Excellent work. |