Interesting you better damn well continue!

Okay... the only story that showed up when I searched for Jun and Sora with character filters... is it Junora?

I really do hope it is...

Yeah! go Sora! Anywayz, please keep writing this story, it sounds like its gonna get interesting!

Yes I think that the ending was a little too twisty, u should provide better character development! You should creat an atmoshpere that is similiar to that of the one in the real world.

I think that if you include my friend Dennis it would reach a whole new level! In the middle where the fight is set, ure composition of tha layouts and other stuff is not very well centered on the character emphasis on the plot's climax. If you were to do a sequel, you should consider maintening the action along with the love story. Like Edward James, the author of "Endulation of Criteria" said, you should investigate the problem within the division of the rythym!

A... Sorato? Not Taito... Sorato.. I'm horrified! Then again, you're FULL of surprises, aren't you! mwahahaha... I'll enjoy this fic, methinks