OMG that was awsome i cant believe some one wrote that it realy cool!

this is sad, but still remains true to marco's personality. I like it.

*blinks* Wow. That was... *cheerful* You really *cheered* me up. But seriously, that was good! That really moved me emotionally and I don't get moved much in that area anymore. Oh, well, RR my stories and keep writin'!

I think this is the best story/poem you've written that I've read so far. Write on!

Very nice and dark...the Marco behind the comedian...the one who both was the reason he stayed in the fight before #5 and the one who complained and wanted to bail ASAP.

So totally Marcoey. I give you a ten.

Nice, but the last line kinda threw me. Still, great job.

I really liked it. Way to go.

:: Applauds, even though his hands are getting sore from applauding loudly on the last fic I read... ::

I loved that! Very Marco-ish. And I'm very impressed at how long you manage to make your poems!