beautifully writen piece.

Just finfished the Manga yesterday and I can realy imagine this scene taking place somewhere in between.

Keep going

Lord Lore

that was so cute! i hope you write more maison ikkoku fanfics not many people write the characters as well as you do

It's very hard to find MI fanfiction, let alone good ones. I haven't encountered that many, but I really loved this one. Seeing this one brief moment between Kyoko and Godai was very appropriate and in character. I love how you captured the nervousness and anticipation between the two. I would love to see you write more.

That's so sweet! Great job!

M-m-m! I am new to Masion Ikkoku, but I certainly addicted. This was a great fic! I really loved your imagery and your truth to the characters; their reactions and thoughts...

Ah, it was wonderful. I think I may go watch some more now. yes...

It was a good least Godai had a nice moment with Kyoko

Very nice. Its achelly refreshing to see a GOOD Maison Ikkoku fanfic.

What a beautiful story! It fits in perfectly with the tone of the original. Your writing and characterization are lovely. I really enjoyed this!

Aww... So sweet! There aren't any other 'blanket scenario'-type Maison Ikkoku fics, and yours was great! This should've happened in the series!

I could just imagine this being in an episode or the manga!

This is probably the best MI fic ever. That may not be saying much, but it is, and you have my thumbs up for it. :)

Very nice, really sweet and very tender. One of the few fics I've seen (and they're aren't many of MI) that show those two as just two people for a moment in a light that they have created together. It was touching...

A beautiful little story! You managed to capture the personalities and characters, and fit smoothly into character with the manga.
You have an excellent skill for romantic fiction, I hope you can write a longer one some day - this, however, works well in its current length. Not too hurried, and not too drawn out. A sweet love scene from a great story.

Wow! That was really wonderful! Adorable, well-written, everyone stays in character. It reminds me of the scenes from Maison Ikkoku when Takahashi-san decides to bestow her strange pity on Yusaku. Really an enjoyable read! Thank you for writing such a sweet work.

Love! I LOVE love!