lol that made me laugh (in a good way)

okay so it started off like a sorato, because i've been reading too many of them recently. and then "how's yamato doing" or something, and that made me think it was Tai. and then Yama starts playing pretend with Tai so then... its either Jyou or Izzy... lol i was totally oblivious for a while. I really loved it though :) thanks

Aw... poor Sora. Poor Jyou. :(

I love how you portray the characters in your stories; it is always an entertaining read (despite the fact it has literally been years since I last saw Digimon, and much has faded from my memory... *sigh* Revisiting old fandoms can sometimes be so hard on a girl!) and, just, wow. Wow.

Great work! Once again, it is a pleasure to read your Digimon fanfic. And this one is at least completed! *winks* *hint-hint, nudge-nudge* XD

That was bloody beautiful. I love it. It was so...I don't know, so real? So touching? So Sora-like and (although not very obvious) 02-Jyou-like? And the insertion of Yamato and Taichi and Sora and Yamato's gap was brilliant.
"What would you do...if I kissed you and told you I liked you?"
I found that very moving, don't ask me why. It's too striking (?), too wistful-sounding, too sincere, too...something. Or perhaps you're just too-good an author. Eitherway, the sentence made me stop reading for a moment and let the words sink in. Just what would have happened if she did that? Painful longing...I love it.
The last line (She blinked back tears with a smile.) was great as well (although the "What would you do" line will always be the best). There's something about how you present tears and smiles together than makes the scene even more moving (my eyes are getting damp again just by typing this review, pathetic...). It summed up how she felt about the whole situation perfectly.
In short: This is brilliant. Beautiful. I'm feeling jealous over your writing skills. I hope you write more fics like this (I've read all your other digimon fics as well, but they didn't move me like this did).
I love this. A lot. Period.

very well written, but i was confused. who exactly was she with?

2 words: loved it!

WHEEEEEE! you're back again, and with a new page, I've been waiting for you to write new stories, God, I'm SOOOOOOOOOO happy because of your come back(even if you are going to "escape again")

plz continue writing, continue your stories -

I had a feeling you'd write something like this sooner or later.

First of all, I am really happy to see an update from you! You were always posting around the Jyori ML and Megchan's board but no fanfiction from you.

You already know how much I love the Jyou/Sora/Yamato triangle. It can take so many directions and I love all three couples. Now, the way you put it in this one... Jyoura, for sure, but there are also hints of Jyouto and Sorato.

Seeing Sora's struggles between friendship and love is really unique. I loved the angst, and how Jyou broke her without even realising it, or intending to. They were both very in-character, and I could see Sora seeking the warmth Jyou provided like that, although the show mostly suggested a crush from Jyou's side, if any. Yamato between them makes things more difficult and develops the angst. Although it was quite short, I really missed the combined angst and romance in your stories, and this was a really pleasant surprise. I would like to see more of this triangle, if you ever get the time to. Your writing style is as wonderful and unique as ever! Keep it up!

Yes I think that the ending was a little too twisty, u should provide better character development! You should creat an atmoshpere that is similiar to that of the one in the real world.

I think that if you include my friend Dennis it would reach a whole new level! In the middle where the fight is set, ure composition of tha layouts and other stuff is not very well centered on the character emphasis on the plot's climax. If you were to do a sequel, you should consider maintening the action along with the love story. Like Edward James, the author of "Endulation of Criteria" said, you should investigate the problem within the division of the rythym!

That was so sad. I'm in tears. Aww. . .poor Sora! I'm gonna go cry in the corner now. Tell me when you write something happy. It was a really good fic, despite the sadness.

More fluffy friendship then romance, I love that!