I absolutely love this story. That little mouse is so funny. But I noticed that you haven't updated in a while. Not knowing the ending of this story is killing me. (sigh) Though I guess I'll just find some way to survive. lol

Great story!

it has been over a year since you added on to this story!add more! please!i will flip if you don't!i love it!it was so d*mn funny!

update update update this story is great I couldn't stop reading it please i wana know what happens to Fairuza

You know I love this story but I'm going to have to agree with dazed chika - this chapter is begging for a beta. Usually I can read through the mistakes and enjoy the story but this was a little hard just trying to figure out what everyone was saying/thinking so it took a little enjoyment away.

Truthfully I thought not to review but then thought it would be easy for you to get a beta. You could post a request for a beta at any of the RoLo Yahoo groups and would probably get a few chapters are short enough that anyone would have time to help you.

The thing is your style is so cute, the mouse is just adorable, so the beta would have to understand that. If you like I'd be willing to help you just let me know. I'm always excited whenever I see you've updated and consider this one of the best RoLo stories as it's so original, mistakes and all.

Blue mouse is at last sighted. One Tokyo Fox gives it cheese in the form of review in hopes of seeing more of blue mouse sooner.

But serously It did sound a bit forced but if you conceder Wolvie's hardhead it fits pretty well.

Update Soon!

look you got one of the the most intersting/origianl fics out there and yet you seem to be havin problems.

PLEZ advertise for a BETA...

ur gramer is sliping, the Ro P.O.V in this has so many mistakes it was hard to follow (exp: "We are mess up, ‘Ro.” Logan said...that should be written " we are really screwed up Ro'" Logan said)

another thing you seem to be losing ur ability to portray Logan corectly. the diologue and internal monologues sound robotic. it doesnt sound like it would actualy happen and that ruins the story.

U write the Mouse P.O.V really well but when u swap P.O.V u still make it sound like the mouse is talking.

hope i helped you and didn't discurage you from writting.

i hope you update again soon.

That was cute!

It's been a long time since the last update but I'm glad you managed to keep the story teh way you started it. Keep it up! Bye now!

great orig plot.i gota love the p.o.v's & the blue mouse. Even though ur grammer is a bit off... when u write as the mouse it seems almost like u did it on purpose. its a really interesting style

continue soon if yah can,

peace!

p.s. Logan all the way for ur next chap.

I like it! I think it should be in Logan's POV

You know, I just realised as I was reading this chapter… I missed that damn mouse. Hehe. I really hope that you’ll update soon again. This was another excellent chapter from Fairuza’s point of view. As for the next part, how about from the POV of Logan, Ororo and Fairuza. I think it will be great. Take care and please update sooner.

This was interesting, enjoyed reading about a "mouse" you are going to tell us a little about it's history in furture chapters I hope. Please update soon.

I love this story I think you should start with Logan's POV

You take an awful long time to update but I can't really complain because the story's so cute. As far as pov's go either is fine but both would be so much better.

Why not the both of them? Make the chapter a little longer maybe and put both their POV. But it's so cute!