Pfft, poor Joey! Well done, keep up the good work.

Niiiice :D

This definitely fits dub-canon characterization. Personally, I don't like the idea of Jonouchi drinking, but this is "Joey" so it is fine.

You said "mutt" a lot.

Some parts of this were really really funny or really stood out. Kaiba in the awkward position hanging on to the sink. "You missed" was particularly cute. "Would this be your best performance?" was my favorite line.

Well... This should have a sequel!

XD What a great ending! I wasn't expecting it. 3 I laughed alot and smiled alot so, it was very good!

really good!

Now I think you should expand on the 'morning after'! :D

The strongest point of this one-shot is the fact that Joey and Kaiba are not out of character. I wouldn’t it have thought possible for such a pairing to work and Kaiba still preserve his arrogant attitude while Joey his buffoonish one; the ‘being drunk’ excuse was an ingenious catalyst. Moreover, the witty remarks spiced up the whole scene. Quite impressive!

*recovers from the laughter that resulted in the end*

For someone that is not a fan of puppyshipping, this was very well done. It ended quite humorously and I think that you did a great job.

I mean...

Seto needs to tell joey he DIDN'T just lose his virginity!

And this is just a great and wonderful fic.

Wow

I'm very happy.

Please write a 2nd!

Hahaha!

'You missed!'

That was funny.

Anyway, you should write a second.

I wonder what will happen in the future!

Seto needs to tell joey he did just lose his verginity!