...if you get another chapter i'll tell you what i think of this fic!

That was... interesting. And it wasn't that dark; could've been much worse. I hadn't noticed before but I see you decided that poor Kiyone deserved a promotion too. Anyways, it was a good story.

Hey a dark fic from you? Well what a surprise. Kinda hard to find your fic though. So what happens next is what I'd like to see!

Er, maybe Ryoko's keeping an eye on her? I hope this doesn't get too dark.