I really loved this story. It's very interesting. Anyway, how did James Potter get into the picture? Did he get transported into the future or something? Well, I hope you post the next chapter soon.

From Star

Very nice! I'm new at , but my judgement is quite good! It's very interesting. pls. update. everything is weird now. Harry and Malfoy friends? Ron's parents dead? And Sirius free? it's so wats with the other James? To me, he may be a reincarnation of him or something. Just like Eriol with Clow Reed in CCS

smooth now lets see you put the tamers into the story now that you got James in the story

Don't forget the commas. Remember, don't skip parts. In between chapters, you are not telling what's happening. Out of ten, about a five. Don't let me get you down. And if I do, cry a river, build a bridge, and get over it. I can't stand writers who fall apart when they get a criticizm. So, just fix it. I send no pity, since no one needs pity.

Good story. Love the twistedness of the plot. I'm eager to learn more about how James Potter got into the story.

Um, well, sorry. I don't really like it. I mean, the plot has promise, but the style is a little to commonplace for me. It's very, well, too modern. You need to take the real book and its language to heart. Anyway, I'm just a cranky hormonal teenager, don't let me get you down.

You should consider a beta-reader. Althought grammar and spelling do not influence in the plot, they are both tools of great regard for others to understand it properly. As you are using MS Word, you should add at least the names in the auto-checking (I, myself, flinch at every mispelled 'Hermoine' instead of 'Hermione' or 'We(a)sly' instead of 'Weasley'). You might also wish to dwell a bit more into Harry's angst/anger to make the sudden change of character more believable and to strenghten his resolve into distancing himself.

Hi hi. thanks for the review...i', glad you like my story Digimon Season 2 AU, anyways i deicded to check out one of your fics...so i decided to read your Harry Potter one...and it's GREAT so far. Believe it or not i have Harry Potter fics too...just not on this profile.

Mine are under Crystal Lily Potter and are called Harry Potter and the Legend of Gryffindor & Harry Potter and the Crystal of the Unicorn. Anyways i'm gonna check out more of your stories now

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Sora Kamiya01

Very interesting, keep writing! Best plot I've heard in a little while.

Keep going

Plezz spullchek yur wurk! Thank-yuu!

Gud story, btw.

OMG! Love it? Please update it soon. I am dyin to know who crushes on who?

i really like this story...hurry with da next chapter! oh and please make it h/h...im such a shipper :D oh and make a warning when you write some spoilers on the next chapter... :)

h/hr soon pleaz!

The first chapter is good, I'll keep reading when the next one comes out. I think you should try to make them a bit longer.