Oh, please update soon! It's so well written, and I really want to know what happens next!

i know this might be old but did you see a persons drawing of this fanfic befor you redid it it on deviant art her name is crycry she drew a seen from here

I so happy that you decide to repost/rework that fic. I really like it. I don't remember words for words the original one, bu it still as good.

Event if the updated are sporadic, I will patiently wait for more. ;)

YOU'RE BACK! *cheers* Sporadic or not, who the hell cares - this fic is back and awesomeness cannot be rushed. Still love this first chapter, and looking forward to seeing what you've done with the rest!

Wow. I have to say the imagery in this kept me going until the end. At first, I thought this might be a 'new to NYC girl falls for a TMNT' and almost dreaded continuing. But as I got further and further and realized...this is something different (I hope) and got to the end.

And decided to do a review.

I seriously liked this, as well as the portrayal of June, Sean, and Brenda. I wondered where this was going until they hit the person and then it all came together and I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes. I can only guess that it's either Splinter or one of the guys these kids hit, but I also like how there's the underlining real life factor. Other than the obvious, Don't D&D, but the fact that sometimes, people don't and won't bother to check if they've hit something.

Anyway, yeah...I liked this. Yes I did.