Your version of Harry is likely to spank Ginny, and I wouldn't mind if you had that later in your fic. But, just for the record, Rowling's Harry wouldn't have done that. Also, Harry's actually being incrediby selfish, calling Ginny "selfish" for not thinking about Harry when she risked her life. It's her life; it isn't Harry's life, and what she does with it is up to her. Even though Harry would have been hurt had she died, it isn't selfish of her to not think "oh, I have to make all my decisions so Harry will be happy."

Arthur, head of the house? Really?

I don't mind the idea itself (corporal punishment); I know it works for some people, but the premise is rather... flawed. It's sexist. I won't tell you it's out-of-date because, frankly, I don't care about times. It doesn't matter what the date is. The idea that parents have to prepare a woman for marriage by making her submissive simply because she's a woman is ridiculous. Maybe a very small handful of women enjoy it; I wouldn't be surprised, but this view should not be generalized to everyone and certainly not Ginny, who's a flaming firebrand who should never be tamed. Also, you don't seem to pay enough mind to the fact that the family just lost Fred, so there is NO WAY they would have felt strongly enough to discipline Ginny at that time; they would have been in mourning together and would not have really thought about what Ginny did. I think Molly is the most ooc in this - she just killed Bellatrix Lestrange; there's no way she'd simply submit to her husband as "the head of the house". She might be a housewife, but she certainly isn't a tame, submissive domestic wifey.

I do hope you continue, though. I liked your writing style, and you do write well. There aren't too many mistakes. Accepting that all of the characters in this are ooc, it is an alright story in its own right.

It appears that you are rather sexist.

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That was child abuse. Spanking is child abuse and I hope you never have kids. And seriously you're sick like you should go to a mental hospital. I mean seriously? Come on! Ginny having to sit in the corner while everyone can see her vagina? Wtf! Everyone's so out of character! Ginny would never give in, Harry's not like that at all, and the weasleys would never do that! It's inappropriate for anyone to be spanked let alone a 16 year old! And bare?! You might as well have put it as incest!

The person who wrote this is a mysoginist dickweed. There is nothing more to say.

Okay, I need to add this to my earlier review. In that review, I tried to be diplomatic and say what I thought of this twisted story in a nicer way because I would never want to get a mean review. However, after reading some of your other reviews I figured you must be used to it by now and I'll give you my real thoughts. THIS STORY IS SO WRONG! These people are so out of character it's crazy! It's an insult to the world Rowling created to have stories about abuse and forced submission from characters so gentle (like Arthur). Ginny would never stand for anything like this. I absolutely hate Molly and Arthur in this! And Harry is so pig-headed and horrible that I can't even stand him! Thinking that his girlfriend deserves punishment, being in charge of her when they are supposed to be equals, being angry that he isn't her only boyfriend...he's just a sexist pig! The only people you could enjoy this story are truly insane. Please, unless it's a total joke, just take it off the site. It makes me angry just reading it! I had to add this because I don't want people to think I truly condone this type of writing. I shouldn't have sugarcoated it in my earlier review. I'm sorry to leave you bad feedback, but this is just sick. I hope I never have to write another bad review again, but you need to hear this. Sorry.

Your story is very well-written, but I feel like it never really could have happened. Now, I know that's the case with a lot of FanFiction (like non-canon couples), but I think you're trying to make it believable and it's not a scenario that could have happened. First, Ginny is not her family's property just because she's underage. That is kind of a sexist sentiment that is no longer prevalent in the modern day. Also, I don't think she would submit to punishment or domination ("wearing the pants") by her father or Harry. She wouldn't allow herself to be spanked at the age of sixteen. Furthermore, I don't think it's right for Arthur to be spanking his 16-year-old daughter bare, not to mention leaving the door open so others can see the spectacle. I have nothing against spanking in general, but this scenario rubbed me the wrong way. Also, I can't see Molly Weasley putting her daughter in the corner with her pants and underwear down when she has six brothers as well as guests visiting. That just doesn't seem plausible - and I feel like Ginny would run away rather than allow that to happen. Over all, good writing style, but I feel like the premise is too old-fashioned to have happened. I also don't think it's right for the men to be in charge - and for Arthur to elude to punishing his wife or having Harry spank Ginny is just wrong. Sorry this is so long, but you did ask for feedback. I do hope you will continue the story, because you have a good writing style and I'd like to see where the plot goes! -TigerLily

im going to stop reading her parents are just too mean its upsetting

thats mean i been bad and never punished physically and especially not with a naked arse! he has no right to look at his daughters private parts when she is over the age of 11. its juust creepy why a father would want to look at his daughters privates

I feel Arthur was too hard on ginny. He should have done something different. I mean she is 16. Plus I totally side with Ginny when she says that it could be too embarrassing. WIth the whole aspect that she is a woman and though he is her father, it would be too weird. He should have done a different punishment and not have listened to Molly.

I believe that Ginny deserves a spanking for her actions. I actually have a story where her and Ron get spanked after CoS because of the chamber thing and the car thing but I haven't been able to post here. Heck I got yelled at for a 5 year old getting spanked in the 80's when it was the norm.

There should be a few warnings on this, such as, child abuse/ au/ forced submission/ spanking of teen/ for only insane people, etc. No person should be forced to submit. In this day and age, forced submission is called abuse. As a woman writing this, you must have some sort of self hatred that others should not be able to see and get the idea that it is appropriate. Find an insane asylum and enter yourself. Trust us, Therese people will get you the help you is the first bad review that I have ever had to write.

There is a lot in this story that I like, and also a lot that I don't. You write well and the point you picked was well chosen but I don't like the way you implied thta when Ginny is married she will be Harry's 'property'. Not only is this outdated but it is something thst Ginny would never have stood for and that Harry wouldn't have wanted. I agree she should do what her parents wanted and asked of her, but Ginny and Harry are equals.

Don't get me wrong I liked the story, it was very well written.

OMG! This is one of the most brilliant discipline stories I have read in a *long* time. In particular, the pants-down corner-time was so hot! Please write more!